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Reborn in the Marvel world, becoming Tony Stark's illegitimate child and gaining all the wisdom of the mechanical prodigy Hiro Hamada from the Big Hero 6. This is a story about a mechanical little genius and his charming old man...
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This is not my story and is written by a Chinese author.
This is a Machine translation. I have cleaned all the chapters I publish to the maximum of my capabilities. It's not perfect, but it's still an enjoyable read.
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Honestly I came with high expectations because the synopsis made me hyped, but it was very disappointing, as it is a translation of MTL there are several Chinese terms that are out of place in the dialogues, there was zero originality so far and several dialogues taken from the films that should be "references " but it's boring to read considering that in a fanfic we want to see original things happening, the dialogue between the MC and tony is very strange in the sense that it's practically "robotic" I think the author wanted to make the two look like geniuses that respect each other but no emotional ties, but it was poorly executed, the author was also incapable of writing well the way Tony talks, it basically sounds like someone else There are several chapters, but most of them are just things we already know and nothing really happening Besides, the protagonist basically has no personality, he's just a cliche super genius who can do anything and that's it. I thought the idea had a lot of potential, it was just poorly executed
The story was going great and I had high hope for it until Baymax started rattling off traditional Chinese medicine to fix modern medical issues.
Word of advice, you can use chat gpt to help make the mtl readable, saves a lot of time.
When you translate a story from another language you have to make sure the dialogue makes sense in the new language… Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Ok... The translation is one of the best I've seen till now.. Not too much Chinese dialogues.. Some are present but it's readable.. P.S: Is the original finished? P.P.S: Please continue updating with the current style.. Improve it, if possible..
well i had high expectations for ff but its huge failure we saw Tony but he don't feel like a tony we knew , ff says he had Hiro's wisdom but we saw not a human wisdom but robotic ai he never make mistakes always perfect.He has nothing to do with Hiro other than Baymax that not even made by Hiro in big hero 6.Their relationship as a father and son feels nothing.Mc casualy make a suit that more complex than Baymax and Mark1-X series as a Baymax side quest and everybody acting like that not that important.
I give this a 5 star due to reading it already and has taken a liking to it. It's not the best but it's good enough to pass time, if anyone wanted to read this in advance it's on the MTLNATION. Although the names can be sometimes confusing but it should not be that hard to read...I think
This is so tiresome, and basically copy and paste with a few interferences from the protagonist here and there. I managed to read up to chapter 39, but it's really boring, I don't recommend it.
It was good at the beginning, but towards the end (300...) it started to get boring. The main character finds many inventions and strengthens himself, but either he does not use any of them or they remain powerless. The events are the same as the movies, only there is a MC in the environment, nothing else. I guess the reason why the main character doesn't use his powers is because the writer isn't smart enough to get it out of the movies. Since the writer's talent is limited, all the events are just a cheap copy of the movies. If you are going to read this series for the inventions, go for it, but if you want to read novels, this is not for you. The characters are soulless. We mostly see the MC so the side characters are stale and unnecessary.
It was good at first but what bothered me was how everyone seemed to look to the MC to solve their problems. The characters were written as though they didn't know what to do with something and could only turn to the MC for help. It was just annoying because while the MC is smart, he is still a teenage boy and it's unrealistic how much authority and trust he is given right off the bat.
I remember reading this once, but I never came back to it. You have done a wonderful to translate this. Ps:what's the OG name if the book
its basically the original MCU, the MC doesn't change anything story relevant genius MC forgets plot so the author doesn't need to actually creat a new story characters don't act like the original
Okay, so far the story is just Okay. It has way too much unnecessary information. So expect a lot of chapters for no real reason. Because the stuff in those chapters could have been summarised into 1 chapter and it would have felt the same. Now, it's a bit weird that the MC is always in the chapters but he feels like he doesn't exist. Or should I say, it feels like he doesn't exist for anyone but Tony and Pepper. Becuase he as a character is relatively ignored by everyone else. He makes Baymax and everyone just acts like it's normal. There is no overall shock by the people around him. It's almost like "Oh, cool! A futuristic robot that can heal you! And it was made by a 14 year old kid! Anyways, so what are you doing Tony?". Even what I just said feels like more of a reaction then the people gave in the story. Because of that it just feels like the MC is a background character while Tony is the main character. The Author seems to be wanting to push the MCU story forward but by doing so the MC's story in this fanfic is suffering. Now, I am only 44 ish chapters in, and I will continue to read it. But so far it is a 3.5-star story. Nothing more, and nothing less. I would only recommend it if you have no other stories to read.
Got to chapter 108 before dropping it. Honestly well translated especially with the fact that this translator is posting multiple and probably doesn’t have much time to proof read everything. [SPOILERS BELOW] Mark is a decently well written character with a clear background that explains his obsessive love for money and his intellect is proven numerous times as he creates new inventions. Sadly that’s where my praise for the story ends. The original author refuses to divert from canon even once. He continuously makes Mark and Tony “stronger” just for the same canon events to happen because the author can’t seem to create their own plot. I finally dropped the story at 108 because Mark had just quite literally nuked a small town to defeat The Destroyer; just for it to do no damage and have to instead be defeated by Thor’s return to might.
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The translator did great, sadly the source is just badly written. Basically we have an American story with dialogues that written for low brow Chinese readers. An apt analogy would be if an American writer wrote about a local American who Isekai'd in China, then write a whole dialogue revolving around the "pull my finger" joke.
best character in Marvel fanfiction I have read so far I hope you make mc more than tecno man and give him some useful abilities that he can have without using nanobots or other armors
Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
It's light reaper so you already know the translation is a banger, very good. Novel is amazing so far, Interaction between mark and tony is really well done, especially tony's personality here. A lot of potential for this novel, I definitely recommend this, no reason to not give it a try.