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Carl travels to the Marvel world and carries the sign-in system with him. After signing for twenty-five years, I finally gained a strong force. Silver Superman template! The power of Superman in the Silver Age was much stronger than that of normal Superman. Traveling through time, eating raw kryptonite, blowing out stars…just when he flew out of the blue star for the first time, watching the sun. 【Ding! Dimensional chat group invites you to join. 】
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alright so i'm on the verge of saying this is a bad MTL, story seems good but i actually got a real headache from tying to decipher the first 3 chapters, if dude can translate better it would be great but it's like he translated from chinese to his own first language to english some of the stuff does not work
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Quality is really bad. looks like an mlt or barely above in quality. Names and genders change regularly. sentences are structured like mlt, barely understandable or just un readable. The plot is basic for a Chinese ff in the MCU with chat group. In 18chapters, nothing much happended even if he already did a mission in the Naruto world. Dialogues are sometimes unreadable othe cryptic due to bad translation and the rest of the time when it's understandable it's just bad. can't say much about updating stability since i just read all chapters in one go. world background is not his just like most FF and we have too little info on it to see mutch of the OC content.
well I saw your comment and reviews so I try improving myself so check it out when ever you saw a mistake try helping me by pointing it out.Love ❤ you
Just go thru ight and remove everything Chinese plus use stuff and characters that are mainstream otherwise don’t use them because only tsunade and mc the rest I don’t so in conclusion get rid of Chinese stuff