摘要
Translation of MTL Fanfiction. That's All.
Do not read if you are looking for a serious story. Mc is ruthless, moody & does whatever he wants. Doesn't care about others.
This fanfiction doesn't belong to me, I just make it more readable, if you're author, want me to remove it, contact me. Poster is AI generated.
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-- 推薦票
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Protagonista irritantemente irritante... tentei me forçar a ler, mas, simplesmente não dá
The translation is good but could be way better if you changed his name to English as well. The development is a** and the mc feels like an edgy teenager who thinks the world revolves around him. I get that this is a translation but to make a good story you shouldn't tell the story a out you instead you should tell it from the character. Like what the character would do, not the author.