/ Movies / Marvel: Batman- Dawn of vengeance
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Bruce Stark, the younger brother of Tony Stark, witnessed his parents' murder at a young age, a traumatic event that shaped his entire life. Unlike Tony, Bruce avoids the public eye, dedicating himself to intense training and mastering both technology and combat skills. Driven by his vow to never let tragedy strike again, Bruce becomes the silent protector of New York City, operating in the shadows to keep the city safe from crime and corruption. Armed with cutting-edge gadgets and a steely resolve, Bruce embraces his role as a dark vigilante, taking on the mantle of the city's guardian. His journey is one of vengeance, justice, and redemption, as he battles inner demons while defending a city that desperately needs him.
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A little early for a real review but this fic is just phenomenal. My favorite Batman fic so far and I’ve read every Batman fic on web novel. Writing quality is great, no issues stand out to me. Updates are stable but it’s to early to tell. Story development has been 🔥, I can’t wait to see what happens next. Character design is probably the best thing the author gots going for him, his understanding of Batman is top tier and other characters feel real imho. To early to rate world building but it’s not nonexistent even this early in. Btw I’m on ch18 rn I’ll edit later if the fic drops in quality.
pretty good but the problem is unedited ai leaves holes. like that fight scene that ended when tombstone ( i have no idea how bruce knew his name) just passed out for no reason. Then batman isnt stoic enuf nor is he showing any detective work nor is he showing his emotion mastery by saying his heart is pounding ect.