摘要
This Picture is not own by me. it is randomly taken from Google.
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A crippled child of unknown origin sets on the path of martial world creating his own destinies and Conquering beauties.
he will renowned by the world as charming war god.
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if you guys give review I may understand to continue or not.
Current release Rate - every 3 week. may increase as per you support.
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寫檢討
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This story is good, try to fix your sentence structure, grammar, and wording. It was blunt without any descriptions of the settings and characters.
This story has potential , but the grammer and wording are a bit off. I don't usually fuss over the grammer though I hope you try to improve it for better understanding. 😊