/ Fantasy / Maids VS Apocalypse
摘要
How long can one ignore the voices in their head?
Nine years. To Mark, that was the limit.
For the majority of his life, Mark White has been fighting a constant battle for his sanity. The voices in his head pushed him toward madness one whisper at a time, and the music he used to ward against them was gradually losing its effects.
As his mental state slowly deteriorated, Mark spent more of his time working on a game he had been developing and lamenting his lack of romantic experience.
One night, the voices dealt him a powerful blow, bringing their battle to an end. To his surprise, Mark won the battle, but that came at a great cost.
The voices might have disappeared, but a visual hallucination arrived to replace them, taking the form of a character from his game: Maids VS Apocalypse. Little did he know that the real apocalypse was already coming for him.
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Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.
Some of the paragraphs were a bit long, recommend re writing them down, or splitting them up too around 50 words or less. Those blocks with the speech that humans can’t understand should be changed. Some of them felt pointless. (A lot of this I’ve learned while writing my book, I’m having to go back through and edit it heavily.) Other than that, was chilling. Cool plot and all that. Let me know if you would like to trade shout outs or collections or something.
The writing quality is very high and the author actually bothers to edit the chapters before releasing them. The MC is a little naive, but I wonder if it's really a problem with him. I mean, he went nine years without being discovered and now he's just spilling the beans like that?
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Decent start, but why must you lock the chapters!!? 😭😭😭 I just hope the author keeps up the daily update and not neglect the book like his other series.
Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top
Not what I expected from a story with apocalypse in the title. It's actually better than expected.
Mark White is an interesting character. He's fun and relatable at times. Great job with the writing quality too, author.
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