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摘要
A man on his late 20s survived more disasters than anyone would ever know, during his whole life, nothing ever worked for him, it was if the world itself wanted to get rid of him.
Until one day when he woke up on a dark space and decided to make a deal with a strange voice that echoed through the abyss.
To enter a world of his choice with a single wish, and the knowledge about 5 things about the world.
"They said one wish, not one power... i already selected the avatar world.. i need a powerful bender, someone who can take on an army on its own, someone badass, iconic.."
"My wish is.. to become Uchiha Madara!"
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I'm forced to add this stupid disclaimer here.
No he is NOT the real Madara, he will NOT have Madara full powers, and the story is NOT about him becoming the one all be all and dominating all the world and getting all the girls.
Now if you can get past that, you more then welcome mate, i shall drink my beer in your honor! but if you can't ... well... im sure there's plenty of other Madara related fanfictions, go ahead and try them.
Cheers!
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This is my very first and probably only fanfiction on this site, I’m doing it as a hobby because i got inspired so it all depends on how well it is received.
English is not my main language but I’m trying my best :D
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Space Dedicated to some boring disclaimer about not owning Avatar, the Image that i use or Madara himself, yeah yeah.... yadda yadda... yall know the drill. Cheers!
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Meh if u ask me then using Madara as a template was a good idea for baiting people but u gave em a really nerf version that isn't even Madara. I expected something great but stopped when some Kyoshi leader was like "he's interesting" like c'mon that's it? Haven't watched avatar but I just tried out the fic cuz it seemed interesting enough but nah dude I'm not really into OP MC or some dude with God fetish but u can still do a good story than just nerfing it and give him training then give him no clue on Wall walking or something. MC tries to be some funny dude but can't say it's enough to make me stay. goood luck
This is a really cool and unique idea I really like how everything is going so far Also is there any romance? and if there is whos the love interest?
First, this is such a wonderful story! I started reading as soon as I saw the first chapter (yep, I've been here since day one 😎) and I love both the Naruto and the ATLA worlds... Plus, since 2018, Madara has been one of my favorite characters of all time! I am extremely pleased that I did pick this up. The writing is extremely well done, showing off the author's storytelling and also descriptive scenes without overly describing what is happening... From the snow-covered temple grounds to the certain giant creatures (I don't know if it's considered a spoiler! I am being careful!) The dialogue between the characters and also the thought processes are fantastic. All of the above feels very natural! I also want to highlight my love for humor in this story. The timing is always spot on and it's very fitting for the ATLA world! I have laughed out loud many times now. The last chapter that was posted as I write this, was a combat one, which the author said is tricky for him but OMG, he did fantastically! I LOVE combat scenes and it's very exciting and realistic, plus there was one part that I *especially* loved. Was VERY Madara and shinobi-like, hehe. The story is developing great. So impressed. Also, the updating is so fast and so often. LOVE IT. Thank you for this story!!!!
So, the author of this story is my husband, and I know that people might think that I am biased, but I truly love this story so much. Koji is an amazing writer and has spent years doing everything from being a DM in D&D to creating quests and other fun stuff for our game servers, guilds, etc. He has always really inspired me with his creativity and I am so happy that he decided to try writing and that so many people get to read the world he creates and give him lovely feedback. I'm very proud of him! As for the story itself, it's the kind I love. I'm a huge Naruto fangirl and have watched Avatar since episode 1 of the original... Which was a long time ago! The OCs are fantastic. I especially love Jackie (Lei), though I think we all do! There are so many awesome characters, funny moments, serious moments, epic combat and SO much more. I really love Koji's world-building and storytelling. Character interaction, dialogue, and character growth are just as important as awesome fight scenes and cool action. Both sides make a story whole and this one is my favorite. <3 I really can't wait to read more! Sadly, I don't even get spoilers! So unfair. :P Keep up the great work, darling! P.S. Webnovel ate my first review, so I am trying again!
1the story is going kind of slow but the premises is real good 2mc is okay I guess, don't really know-how you manage to downgrade his tajustu so much ,my man Madara took down an entire army platoon on his own, even as a child he already was a killing machine and took down a Senju squads on his own without mangekyou , man that downgrade hurt my soul for that along minus 1 star for quality 3 also you seem to have the tendency to explain things twice like in the first couple chapters but at least you not asking for Patreon donation so its oke keep up the hard work
Ok, so, I've currently read the latest chapter (ch 38 Push and Pull) and I'll be giving my review based on that progress. Just to note, I'm no professional reviewer or anything like that, just a guy who decided to give my two cents about something he liked reading. Writing Quality: 5/5 I couldn't spot anything that made me go, "Oh, that's miss spelled" or "This sentence makes no sense". Either I'm just too blind or it's really just that good. Stability of Updates: 4/5 I started reading this when 38 chapters were already released. So I have yet to experience a 'wait time'. It'd feel unfair if I were to give a 5/5 though. Story Development: 5/5 I think this is being done very well, slow, but still very well. At no point in time did I ever feel any chapter was 'filler'. The overall pacing, though slow, is always in constant motion. If you can't tell yet, if you don't enjoy novels that take their time, then you'll probably want to pass on this one. Character Design: 5/5 Okay, so here is where ... more than a few complaints from other readers have originated from, but I'll cover that in the overview part. The side characters or any character that's not the MC are all very enjoyable to read about. I can truly say that I'd enjoy reading a sort of side content about Lei (or Jackie) and Kaliya during that 3 year time skip. The MC is .... feels... real to me. Not really sure how else to describe that, it's a good thing that's for sure though. World Background: 5/5 Things feel very fluid and consistent with how the world is progressing and reacting. Again, it just feels good and nice with nothing really negative standing out. Overview: Ok then, so, it's a good novel. Plain and simple, it's fun, engaging, I wanted to just keep reading it and not stop... until I had to. A big complaint I've seen from other comments is that the MC isn't the real Madara or that the story is too slow. Truthfully, those comments are correct, but that's not a bad thing though. No, in fact it's a great thing. The Madara in this novel isn't the 'Real Madara', but he's still very strong.... borderline OP. I only say borderline OP cause it's doubtful he'd be able to handle the BIG 'foes' in the spirit realm... for now. Not too sure if that's something that'll change in the future or if it's something that even needs to be changed. At the moment, Madara is his own character unique to the novel, not some overt-OP demi-ninja-god that most people might be used to. That's a great thing though, cause that ties into why the novel feels 'slow'. Gotta remember, this is the ATLA (Avatar: The Last Airbender) world, this is a rather small-low-tier power ceiling world. If Madara WAS full power, he'd bulldoze practically anything & everything in this world, not something that'd be too exciting for every novel. The story goes 'slow', but it gets all those details that are easily missed by many people. Something I feel actually helps to push this novel into a higher tier of novel, if that's even a thing. Look, I feel I've been going on a bit too long here, so I'll just say it's a good novel. Give it a try, see if you like it, no it's not the OP Madara you might be expecting but he's still a fantastic character. I'll be looking forward to reading more. I'll be sure to update/edit this review as more chapters get released to keep it consistent.
Bruh when’s the update I’m begging in my knees I need an update, it’s been a couple months. You used to update daily and left us on a major chillhanger please
So this is my first review but I really want to support the author of this amazing novel I will not tell any spoilers So what I find Faszinating about this novel ist that the author, some how made it to make one of the coolest charakters(Madara) into an even cooler character by giving him an personality that fits him even better and some how doing that in the world of avatar So I just want to say that this i one of my top three of all time novels And I hope it will be a beautiful journey that I will be able to witness Best luck to you author-san you created a masterpiece
I hate finding stories like this, so good that when you realize it hasn't been completed or updated in a few months you only have so long to enjoy giving it.
Super enjoyable read, if anyone stumbles across this novel and even has an inkling of intrigue, they should 100% give it a shot. Minor grammatical errors that don’t affect the reading quality much at all, but still noticeable sometimes. MC is enjoyable as he is navigating the world trying to achieve his goals, all the while constantly battling himself trying to balance ruthlessness and compassion. I especially appreciate that his progress isn’t linear, there’s plenty he is learning as he goes and information that was previously thought to be correct that is then proved wrong. The world building is fun, nothing too fleshed out detail wise, but also surprisingly consistent in terms of the details provided while the MC is in each location. It’s kind of a funny balance that works simply because (as previously stated) of the consistency so it feels like you’re given a small but intriguing picture to look at. The side characters are great, each one displays their own unique personality and emotions that stay remarkably consistent throughout the story while also not remaining stagnant. The ONLY true problem with this story in my eyes, is simply the update consistency, or rather, lack there of. I understand the authors plight as he has stated recently that life hasn’t been the most fortunate as of late. But, that doesn’t mean I’m going to artificially inflate the rating for updating stability. If the author can regain consistency in uploading then I’ll gladly change my review as I highly respect the time and dedication that has gone into this story and greatly appreciate the privilege of reading it. Overall in my personal opinion; Writing Quality; 5/5 (occasional minor errors shouldn’t weigh too heavily) Updating Stability 2/5 (not a 1 simply because it used to be pretty consistent) Story Development 5/5 (enjoyable amount of mini arcs and world navigation) Character Design 5/5 (Enjoyable MC and side characters, nobody is one dimensional) World Background 5/5 (If I went off of details of the main areas in the story it’d be lower but I’m factoring in the additional characteristics the author has included as well as the inclusion of cultural details and differences)
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Writing Quality - Haven't yet seen a single mistake. Stability of Updates - Author updates are fast. Story Development - I like the way it's currently going. Character Design - I like the main character's current personality. World Background - He does the bare minimum in explaining the places the main character visits but the clothes the main character wears are explained in detail and the Author even made an artwork (I don't know who owns it.)
[CH 25] A quality Fanfic among the various fanfics in this platform. The story progression and Character development is top notch. Even the supporting/side characters are interesting to read. Solid updation of chapters () and world background. All the best author. Hope to read more of these quality content 👏👍
Writing Quality is good with little mistakes but the Author fixes them. The stability of updates is 5 sometimes the Author updates more than 1 chapter. Story development is a 5. I like that he also will fight another transmigrator/ reincarnator. Character Design is also a 5 the Author portrayed Madara as the original Madara. World background is a 4.9 the reason is the mc has not explored the world yet but with the way the story is going it is going to be a 5 star. Overall it is a solid % star I recommend this book very much. Now
One of the few fanfictions I've truly loved, with a MC who feels like a part of the world rather than just a variable forcefully embedded and is a slave to the plot. Even the bonding is rather subtle and felt natural. Not much needs to be said about his power, being Madara-effing-Uchiha himself. All in all, a very good read
This is a rare book with good writing in this platform. and in my honest opinion author you shoud paractise your writing with fan fics till you are comfortable and then make a original book because in some places during reading i felt like your writing is getting constricted by the og plotline and og world building and i would love to read a original work from you cuz your writing style is intresting man. For those people coming in and reading this be aware that this is not a multiverse fic so there is no op madara steamrolling the avatar world in 50 chapters{like come on guys at some points i also felt frustrated cuz i felt madara geting beaten there was wierd but just think of this as a madara partial template user in avatar world he doesnt have powers that can break world laws and anhilate verything} and i am waiting for original by you author, man i like the stories writen by good fan fic authors cuz they are intresting most of the times. over all good job. . . . . . . . . . . . . ok all good things and proper done now time to release the irational frustration after seing madara geting beaten by some fire nation dancers
10/10, I like the concept and the story background in the character and the fact that the MC it self not OP in flash. For author hope you seen this, when I read this ff of your I accidentally get a good idea about a new one piece ff. I want to make my own ff but my English is bad and I can't write a good story for it. 😅😅 So I have the FF title my self, The title is "ONE PIECE : I'M THE STORM THAT IS APPROACHING". 🌪️🌪️🌪️🌪️⚡⚡⚡⚡ Just like your ff, instead of get madara power and knowledge and to Avatar world, it's about a man choose to go to One piece world with vergil power (so his devil form devil trigger and sin devil trigger is his devil fruit power "Demon-Demon Devil Fruit"🔥🔥), knowledge, intelligence, personality (some of which match with MC), and Yamato (vergil devil arm). I'm Devil May Cry fan, and there not a single good fanfic about or with DMC power, and I can't make it my self 😭😭 Any one who can make this idea of mine happens Thanks in advance 😍😍
Writing quality is good. Story development is good Character design is pretty awesome. Updating stability 1-2 per day hopefully.. World Background is already good and need to travel before Aang awoke. Madara needs Fame and wreck the Fire Nation to make money 🤑.
▪︎ Writing Quality..............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Story Development.......☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Character Design..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ Updating Stability.........?¿?¿? ▪︎ World Background........☆☆☆☆☆