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This was a really fun ATLA story. Note it is a "nerfed" Madara because his powers had to fit within the rules of the world so he is a powerful fire bender among other things he was able to keep. Half of it is pre canon and i enjoyed it a lot then once canon happens you can see how he affected canon. Only downside is that it hasn't been updated in 5 months so it looks dropped but it was a fun read and i still recommend people reading it despite it not being finished.
Best reading of this year hope the author keeps writing it since he hasn’t posted in a while.
Author, are you still gonna be writing this? I absolutely love this book and I hope you keep Writing
5 stars because it's so great but the update rate now is really sad،... ....... ............................................................................................................................................................
This is one of the best fanfic I have read hope it isn't stopped love the art also that's all really hope azula becomes his wife deffo one of the best fanfic I have read and i haven't even watched naruto soo don't really know Madera besides the edits on tiktok
I need more! This is so damn good. One of the best fics I've ever read. Wonder how Zuko will react to Toph being Madara's little sister. Looking forward to how things will go in the future. Ahhhhhhhh I'm so excited.
Po meu mano, talvez você não entenda português, mas sério continua escrevendo. Muiito boa a história, na maioria das histórias o protagonista é um otario, provavelmente é uma forma do autor soltar o seu lado ruim, mas aqui não, aqui é um der humano que se importa com aqueles que estão em volta
It was an enjoyable read and flowed really well, it was stated by others but i will also say it, he is not Madara but does take some aspects of his personality. I do recommend this for others especially since the author started posting again.
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I really love the overall concept of the story, so far I have no complaints. Pretty satisfied with the characters and plot, only thing is the slow updates. No rush tho 😅
It's impressive how merely releasing two chapters after months of inactivity could always put this book back on the rankings. Truly a work of art.
Super enjoyable read, if anyone stumbles across this novel and even has an inkling of intrigue, they should 100% give it a shot. Minor grammatical errors that don’t affect the reading quality much at all, but still noticeable sometimes. MC is enjoyable as he is navigating the world trying to achieve his goals, all the while constantly battling himself trying to balance ruthlessness and compassion. I especially appreciate that his progress isn’t linear, there’s plenty he is learning as he goes and information that was previously thought to be correct that is then proved wrong. The world building is fun, nothing too fleshed out detail wise, but also surprisingly consistent in terms of the details provided while the MC is in each location. It’s kind of a funny balance that works simply because (as previously stated) of the consistency so it feels like you’re given a small but intriguing picture to look at. The side characters are great, each one displays their own unique personality and emotions that stay remarkably consistent throughout the story while also not remaining stagnant. The ONLY true problem with this story in my eyes, is simply the update consistency, or rather, lack there of. I understand the authors plight as he has stated recently that life hasn’t been the most fortunate as of late. But, that doesn’t mean I’m going to artificially inflate the rating for updating stability. If the author can regain consistency in uploading then I’ll gladly change my review as I highly respect the time and dedication that has gone into this story and greatly appreciate the privilege of reading it. Overall in my personal opinion; Writing Quality; 5/5 (occasional minor errors shouldn’t weigh too heavily) Updating Stability 2/5 (not a 1 simply because it used to be pretty consistent) Story Development 5/5 (enjoyable amount of mini arcs and world navigation) Character Design 5/5 (Enjoyable MC and side characters, nobody is one dimensional) World Background 5/5 (If I went off of details of the main areas in the story it’d be lower but I’m factoring in the additional characteristics the author has included as well as the inclusion of cultural details and differences)
It’s okay, but waiting months for new chapters that don’t bring the same quality as the ones before is disappointing.👍
This is a great story. Nuff said. Well, if you are hesitating, give the first few chapters (5 to 10) a read. If you like it, great. If not, then read something else. There’s a lot of other things to choose from.
Author, if you reading this can you at least update us readers if the story is in Hiatus or Dropped. Writing Quality - 5 Story Development - 4 Character Design - 4 Updating Stability - 1 World Background - 4
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Some people said the MC isn't Madara and because of that, they didn't like this novel. They just mean that they want a Madara with the same personality as in the Naruto series. The MC can be nerfed, but they want the true Madara, not the guy who has his power. Honestly, it's clickbait, but I still like this book 'cause it's quite boring when the real Madara is here. He just wants some peace, and in the another world, there is nothing that he can pay attention to, especially since there is no Hashirama or someone strong enough like him in the Avatar world
Boring asf who cares about avatar lol I’ll straight form a clan and army to first conquer the fire nation 😂
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Can someone explain how big his chi pool is? is it less than Azula? I forgot which chapter it was but it mentioned his chi pool stopped growing.
I hate finding stories like this, so good that when you realize it hasn't been completed or updated in a few months you only have so long to enjoy giving it.
with an app like wattpad, where i expect at best a 4/10 experience, i am happy to say that this is one of the best fanfiction i have ever read, i am sad to see that you haven't updated in two months. however, you should feel proud of what you have made here. alltogether, I'd say this is a 9/10 experience in fanfiction (i have over 1500 fanfiction favorited/read between all sights) and 7/10 as far as books go. keep it up, you have what a great skill.
This is one of if not the best thing i have read on this app I wish this author would write a fantasy novel because i know it would be top tier
This is a rare book with good writing in this platform. and in my honest opinion author you shoud paractise your writing with fan fics till you are comfortable and then make a original book because in some places during reading i felt like your writing is getting constricted by the og plotline and og world building and i would love to read a original work from you cuz your writing style is intresting man. For those people coming in and reading this be aware that this is not a multiverse fic so there is no op madara steamrolling the avatar world in 50 chapters{like come on guys at some points i also felt frustrated cuz i felt madara geting beaten there was wierd but just think of this as a madara partial template user in avatar world he doesnt have powers that can break world laws and anhilate verything} and i am waiting for original by you author, man i like the stories writen by good fan fic authors cuz they are intresting most of the times. over all good job. . . . . . . . . . . . . ok all good things and proper done now time to release the irational frustration after seing madara geting beaten by some fire nation dancers
The best Avatar Fanfiction I’ve read, to the point of re-reading it two more times. Top quality writing filled with badass wry and a little comedy. Story built is amazing and it makes you exited to read more and know what’s to come. Characters are well written and are true to cannon, while OCs are well thought out and given real personality that makes them blend perfectly with Cannon Characters The update rate is poor and inconsistent…sometimes goint newly half a year without a single update, which can be frustrating, although the author writes for free so I can’t complain too much, the only ting stopping this story from being one of the best on Webnovel is the poor to non-existent consistency of updates. Would highly recommend for reading who can patiently wait for more chapters but if you’re restless like me, I’d recommend waiting to see if this ever reaches 100 chapters before reading it like I wish I had done myself
This was a really fun ATLA story. Note it is a "nerfed" Madara because his powers had to fit within the rules of the world so he is a powerful fire bender among other things he was able to keep. Half of it is pre canon and i enjoyed it a lot then once canon happens you can see how he affected canon. Only downside is that it hasn't been updated in 5 months so it looks dropped but it was a fun read and i still recommend people reading it despite it not being finished.
Best reading of this year hope the author keeps writing it since he hasn’t posted in a while.
Author, are you still gonna be writing this? I absolutely love this book and I hope you keep Writing
5 stars because it's so great but the update rate now is really sad،... ....... ............................................................................................................................................................
This is one of the best fanfic I have read hope it isn't stopped love the art also that's all really hope azula becomes his wife deffo one of the best fanfic I have read and i haven't even watched naruto soo don't really know Madera besides the edits on tiktok
I need more! This is so damn good. One of the best fics I've ever read. Wonder how Zuko will react to Toph being Madara's little sister. Looking forward to how things will go in the future. Ahhhhhhhh I'm so excited.
Po meu mano, talvez você não entenda português, mas sério continua escrevendo. Muiito boa a história, na maioria das histórias o protagonista é um otario, provavelmente é uma forma do autor soltar o seu lado ruim, mas aqui não, aqui é um der humano que se importa com aqueles que estão em volta
It was an enjoyable read and flowed really well, it was stated by others but i will also say it, he is not Madara but does take some aspects of his personality. I do recommend this for others especially since the author started posting again.
[img=Out of it][img=In a daze][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Loving it][img=Sigh][img=Speechless][img=Smug][img=Smitten][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=disgusted][img=coins]
I really love the overall concept of the story, so far I have no complaints. Pretty satisfied with the characters and plot, only thing is the slow updates. No rush tho 😅
It's impressive how merely releasing two chapters after months of inactivity could always put this book back on the rankings. Truly a work of art.
Super enjoyable read, if anyone stumbles across this novel and even has an inkling of intrigue, they should 100% give it a shot. Minor grammatical errors that don’t affect the reading quality much at all, but still noticeable sometimes. MC is enjoyable as he is navigating the world trying to achieve his goals, all the while constantly battling himself trying to balance ruthlessness and compassion. I especially appreciate that his progress isn’t linear, there’s plenty he is learning as he goes and information that was previously thought to be correct that is then proved wrong. The world building is fun, nothing too fleshed out detail wise, but also surprisingly consistent in terms of the details provided while the MC is in each location. It’s kind of a funny balance that works simply because (as previously stated) of the consistency so it feels like you’re given a small but intriguing picture to look at. The side characters are great, each one displays their own unique personality and emotions that stay remarkably consistent throughout the story while also not remaining stagnant. The ONLY true problem with this story in my eyes, is simply the update consistency, or rather, lack there of. I understand the authors plight as he has stated recently that life hasn’t been the most fortunate as of late. But, that doesn’t mean I’m going to artificially inflate the rating for updating stability. If the author can regain consistency in uploading then I’ll gladly change my review as I highly respect the time and dedication that has gone into this story and greatly appreciate the privilege of reading it. Overall in my personal opinion; Writing Quality; 5/5 (occasional minor errors shouldn’t weigh too heavily) Updating Stability 2/5 (not a 1 simply because it used to be pretty consistent) Story Development 5/5 (enjoyable amount of mini arcs and world navigation) Character Design 5/5 (Enjoyable MC and side characters, nobody is one dimensional) World Background 5/5 (If I went off of details of the main areas in the story it’d be lower but I’m factoring in the additional characteristics the author has included as well as the inclusion of cultural details and differences)
It’s okay, but waiting months for new chapters that don’t bring the same quality as the ones before is disappointing.👍
This is a great story. Nuff said. Well, if you are hesitating, give the first few chapters (5 to 10) a read. If you like it, great. If not, then read something else. There’s a lot of other things to choose from.
Author, if you reading this can you at least update us readers if the story is in Hiatus or Dropped. Writing Quality - 5 Story Development - 4 Character Design - 4 Updating Stability - 1 World Background - 4
揭示劇透 Some people said the MC isn't Madara and because of that, they didn't like this novel. They just mean that they want a Madara with the same personality as in the Naruto series. The MC can be nerfed, but they want the true Madara, not the guy who has his power. Honestly, it's clickbait, but I still like this book 'cause it's quite boring when the real Madara is here. He just wants some peace, and in the another world, there is nothing that he can pay attention to, especially since there is no Hashirama or someone strong enough like him in the Avatar world
Boring asf who cares about avatar lol I’ll straight form a clan and army to first conquer the fire nation 😂
volveras? te extraño-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Can someone explain how big his chi pool is? is it less than Azula? I forgot which chapter it was but it mentioned his chi pool stopped growing.
I hate finding stories like this, so good that when you realize it hasn't been completed or updated in a few months you only have so long to enjoy giving it.
with an app like wattpad, where i expect at best a 4/10 experience, i am happy to say that this is one of the best fanfiction i have ever read, i am sad to see that you haven't updated in two months. however, you should feel proud of what you have made here. alltogether, I'd say this is a 9/10 experience in fanfiction (i have over 1500 fanfiction favorited/read between all sights) and 7/10 as far as books go. keep it up, you have what a great skill.
This is one of if not the best thing i have read on this app I wish this author would write a fantasy novel because i know it would be top tier
This is a rare book with good writing in this platform. and in my honest opinion author you shoud paractise your writing with fan fics till you are comfortable and then make a original book because in some places during reading i felt like your writing is getting constricted by the og plotline and og world building and i would love to read a original work from you cuz your writing style is intresting man. For those people coming in and reading this be aware that this is not a multiverse fic so there is no op madara steamrolling the avatar world in 50 chapters{like come on guys at some points i also felt frustrated cuz i felt madara geting beaten there was wierd but just think of this as a madara partial template user in avatar world he doesnt have powers that can break world laws and anhilate verything} and i am waiting for original by you author, man i like the stories writen by good fan fic authors cuz they are intresting most of the times. over all good job. . . . . . . . . . . . . ok all good things and proper done now time to release the irational frustration after seing madara geting beaten by some fire nation dancers
The best Avatar Fanfiction I’ve read, to the point of re-reading it two more times. Top quality writing filled with badass wry and a little comedy. Story built is amazing and it makes you exited to read more and know what’s to come. Characters are well written and are true to cannon, while OCs are well thought out and given real personality that makes them blend perfectly with Cannon Characters The update rate is poor and inconsistent…sometimes goint newly half a year without a single update, which can be frustrating, although the author writes for free so I can’t complain too much, the only ting stopping this story from being one of the best on Webnovel is the poor to non-existent consistency of updates. Would highly recommend for reading who can patiently wait for more chapters but if you’re restless like me, I’d recommend waiting to see if this ever reaches 100 chapters before reading it like I wish I had done myself