/ Anime & Comics / Lustful Adventure in Pokemon World
摘要
Oliver was just an ordinary kid, dreaming of becoming a powerful Pokemon trainer. But all of that changed when he was killed in a hit-and-run accident. As he lay dying in the hospital, he was visited by an angel named Seraphina who offered him a chance at a new life.
She transformed him into a handsome boy and sent him on a journey to become the greatest Pokemon trainer in the world. But as an orphan with no money, Oliver quickly realized that his dreams were out of reach - until he was approached by a mysterious organization that promised to make him a trainer to be reckoned with.
Desperate for a chance at greatness, Oliver joined the organization and began his training in earnest. Before he knew it, he started to get everything he want. Money, fame and Harem.
He became not only a good trainer but also one of the celebrity in Hoenn.
Join Oliver in his Lustful Journey to become the most famous person in the pokemon World.
[Note:
The cover photo is not mine. If it is yours, do let me know.
One last thing, I can't guarantee that I would be able to finish it. But I will try hard to finish
It.]
[This novel is in break. I will start uploading again once I finished writing another volume.]
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I think you are poor in writing a world background because if the ratio of male is less than female even poor orphan should be treated 100 times better than you have written and girls would be more submissive and treating boys better than written even so for handsome boys because if not the population of boy will continue to decrease and this will be a problem for the government in the novel you are writing and please don't add rose in the harem or restaurant manager
Not a bad story idea. Though the grammar could be better, I know some people struggle with English, I know I do, and I’m an English major lol. The story feels like it’s somewhere on a pendulum swinging back and forth between English and Chinese writing style. The MC is kinda stupid, but what MC isn’t stupid a lot in the beginning? Overall, not a bad story, but could use some grammar fixing and perhaps some changes.
*man, lately I give off only low ratins. Is this me or just a fate? * *whistle *~AnYwAY~ Bohoo, I am poor boy with tragic fate, please love me! -that's wasn't even me, yes, that's mc character. That's all. Right, just a harem jorney with somewhat relatable main character that doesn't make you cringe and wouldn't be a pathetic simp, is already too much to ask for. What a time to be alive...huh?
Me : Seeing lustful and pokemon in a same Sentence.