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Very interesting so far. The release schedule has some loops, but the story seems to have a good mysterious aspect which encourages future reading. By all means, this is a well written novel, and I love how detailed and up to front the story is! Keep It up!
The story so far seems interesting. It's rare to find a 1st person POV in writing these days. I can't tell much from the story since there are only 2 chapters but I'm hoping to give feedback on more.