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Revenge is the only thing she wants after knowing the truth.
However, is revenge can satisfy her? Revenge for the man and woman that betrayed her in her past life is not worth it.
"Wait, where am I? What's this place?" She asks.
"This is your space and I'm your guardian." A little boy answered.
With this space, she climbed higher in this life. At the same time, someone reached for her hand and said that he would help her. To protect what she needs to protect.
......
The Man: You don't want to have revenge on them?
The woman: No. They are not worth it. But if they are looking for death, I don't mind giving them some lessons.
The Man: Good. Then you can focus on me.
The woman:...
***This story development is very slow.
***The cover image for this novel is not mine. I just edit it. All credit goes to the artist that draws it.
*** English is my second language. Sorry, I am sorry if you have difficulty reading my novel. If that is so, this novel is not your cup of tea
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I love this kinda of story.thanks for it.im really having fun reading it😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I don’t mean to discriminate. English is my 3rd language. This is only an honest opinion please don’t be offended. This story still needs a lot of editing. Also, please improve your vocabulary ..
Muy buen inicio. Espero que el autor siga con la historia, lo apoyaré. Espero más capítulos para entrar en la historia. Felicito al autor, se que será una gran historia. Volverá dos o tres años antes? Para salvar a su abuelo? Ojalá que sí el autor lo haga y que aparezca pronto el MC.
This review is mostly for the Author and where they need to focus on what to fix with their writing style. Okay, so I've read from start to end (current end Chapter 203, with the ave cost in stones between 4-6 per chapter, which is (VERY) roughly around 5-600 stones in total), and here are my views so far (Warning Spoilers Below!): The Cons: The Grammar is terrible!!! This is a major thing and it needs to be addressed as soon as possible. Every time I see a misspelled word, wrong word or even a missing comma, it ruins the reading experience. It's jarring and disruptive to read smoothly. Your story needs some SERIOUS TLC (tender loving care) with regards to editing! There are also some rather glaring plot holes with regards to the story, mostly involving the time travel aspect. If you're going to play with time travel, you need to clearly and logically sound out the backstory. Simply forcing things to mesh doesn't work for a lot of readers. An example: (I've commented on this before) But the timeline with MC past enemy's is weird due to the fact that they both joined Uni later in their past lives (both around 20-21, that's a 2-3 year difference), but now they've both joined at 18 with no explanation on how this happened. So yes, you can say it's "due to the butterfly effect", but you need to explain HOW this came about. They don't share the shame social circles, nor have they met in this lifetime. So why the enemy female lead is suddenly at Uni with no logical reason, other than "Because!" is silly. The "side villains".... This isn't so much a con on your part, but more of a generalization for the genre you're writing in. Are all the young woman in this world retards? Can't people take rejection and move on? It drives me crazy reading the level of stupidity of this arch-type. It seriously makes me grind my teeth in frustration. Now normally, I should post the "Pros", but seeing as your novel is already highly ranked at the time I've typed this, I feel like you've already nailed down what you need to write. But for future readers, I'll type down a few quick points: The Female lead is a level headed young woman, who is willing to put in the effort to succeed in life on her own terms. Can never say no to cute pets. Female lead can kick ass. That is all.
Good story..rebirth novels are really a lot more exciting and interesting to read waiting for the female lead to get revenge and her to achieve success..this novel so far is really good👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
I like the story but the grammar needs some improvement. I can help you with the editing if you want😉😁😊 Just tell me😅😅😅😅😅 Feel free to contact me Hahahaha
This book has A LOT of filler chapters, I mean A LOT, nothing gets done, no progress is made, right now I’m just like, “GET TO THE POINT” I’ve honestly tried to get past the 500+ chapters of stale and repetitive story but I’ve reached full capacity…sorry I’m out
This is the best novel I have read so far. It is very interesting and I could read it for hours a day. But please work on your spelling and keep up the good work!!!
Enjoyed this novel to the point where I was up until 2am and spent all my spirit coins reading the private chapters. Kudos to the author and the translator. Few typos here and there that affected the sentence structure but I totally overlooked 👍
This story has some charming parts and is like most other stories on her being overdramatic and have some seriously stupid villains. But unfortunately unlike other stories like it. It suffers from deep grammatical errors making it unpleasant to read.
Honestly i like this novel everything is best except for writing quality. Dear author i hope you can focus more on writing quality, otherwise this novel is great i would highly recommend this novel to all the readers to read🙂.
A very exciting and interseting story but a pity the chapter is too short.And also a chapter a day is not enough.Can you please release more chapters please,at least three chapters per day. [img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=exp]🤪😁👨🦲👌
The problem with the grammar has been resolved to some extent,so i have to praise the efforts of the author. Nice work author
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Well, I like the plot and the background of the story. I had not read a lot of romance story with a little bit of fantasy(the space) like this. This novel has the mystery that yet had been reveal(I’m at chapter 257) [mystery like her true family, why she cannot remember her bio grandpa] which that kindda piss me a little... Overall I enjoy reading it though. This story is quite slow for my taste All the event that had happen after FL was adopted untill now ‘the FL,ML is so good looking and attracted a lot of birds and bees...hence other female get jealous’ again and again.🧐 Despite that I still do enjoy reading this novel and recommend to everyone. Thank you author for your hardworking and time.
The novel is very interesting interms of the story development and character design. What i find problematic is the the writing quality. there are a lot of grammatical errors that need to be corrected for better reader experience. Overall, good job. P.S : I can help you with the editing
I love the book but somehow it has stalled and the chapters are fun but there is not much of importance to, you have stopped developing the characters and you only stay with the description
5 star for this novel..I love the story very much.Yu Qi was totally my favourite MC..Long Hui was my favourite shameless person...🎊🎊🎊🎉🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊
This book has potential its just a pity the translator/editor is not doing it justice. I wish someone else can redo or proofread it again🙏🙏🙏🙏 all in all, all the best and wish you success.
I really like this kind of reborn..Female lead become clever and kind after her reborn..also having that kind of space is really good and a cute guardian...I also want it..💕💕💕 author-sama when we will meet the male lead..I can't wait to see him..