摘要
[You Leveled Up!]
[You have learned a new rune.]
Arthur Silvera's world just glitched. His mysterious new 'Legacy' is transforming him – a nobody – into the ultimate stat-absorbing, rune-crafting powerhouse. But is this power a gift... or an unmanageable curse?
In a world of magic-infused tech, Arthur must master his abilities to survive. Monstrous dungeons, mech-powered guilds, and realms beyond imagining await… but with a Legacy this broken, the whole system might just come crashing down around him.
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At first, the book was quite mediocre. I didn’t think much of it and expected nothing special. HOWEVER, after about 100 chapters, the story picked up and I was utterly enthralled. I couldn’t keep my nose out of this beautiful piece of art. There are some mistakes throughout, but all of its good qualities far outweigh any inconvenience a reader comes across. Seeing everything come together and trying to guess what the protagonist is thinking is incredibly exhilarating. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up Author. Bless you and your beautiful mind.
I have read this work all the way until the second volume,and right now, I’m so speechless. I love it so far. The author has included all, or most of all, the things needed to write a book of this caliber. It includes betrayal, death, tough decisions, plot twists, the loss of loved ones(not death but like how Kira and his father disappeared), and is overall a rollercoaster. Continue to write this amazing book, dear author. While I haven’t read any of the second volume, the first volume was full of such character development and personal realizations of the main character. I love how you didn’t just start the character out weak and made him a powerhouse in like a hundred or so chapters but you kept throwing hardship after hardship at him making him stronger in the process. While he did get stronger among his peers, he didn’t show off nor did he become overpowered. He kept a low profile and slowly, but surely, climbed the ranks to what he was at the end of the first volume. At the end of the volume, I love how Arthur realized that the power he has was not given by Jizo nor that it wasn’t the inheritance’s power, but his power that has been awaken by Jizo. I also love how there was an internal battle between the fragment of Jizo’s soul and Arthur at the end. Just wanted to say keep it up author. You’re doing great!
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The story jumps and skips around randomly. In the middle of things it always, ALWAYS, jumps away so that nothing ever feels satisfying. This is exactly the worst way to write a book. The MC, meanwhile, is a total beta. He's the kind of guy that would watch his girlfriend get f*cked because somebody asked him politely. He's led around by the nose by the author. The greatest proof that he's just a follower is that he is constantly getting bullied by the author to go here or do that without any rhyme or reason, and he does it even though his own character should have chosen something else. That's the problem. Never once does this character make a judgement that he would have made on his own and stuck with it. He's just the authors puppet.
I enjoy reading honestly reviews and I think I should provide one. as of chapter 30, the MC is given an amazing ability and is coming from a place of no ability in a world of super powers. what does he do? does he plan, learn, and be cautious while growing stronger? no, he is greedy and only survives due to luck and plot armour. it is disappointing seeing how the mc can be aware of his fragility and still rush into death like an idiot. I dislike seeing the other perspectives and even skip them because I don't care about these other individuals. it is a good story compared to a lot of other garbage on here but no where near flawless.
The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed). I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what. As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line. The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats). I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!
what's the deal with the academy or school he can become strong without it instead of making himself strong he is very weak to waste his time in school no money and weak but he still go to school for what?? to flaunt he is awakened this is pure bullshit just to add academy or school ,......................................................[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]..........
Level 10 in Ep 40. This story is too slow peaced and I think the reason is because author want to make Ep no higher. Mc is just an ordinary person who got a system by luck. Even after he got a system, he is still ordinary. Dont get me wrong, he skills has potential just that He is not someone who is keep trying to get stronger. So, what do he do? He saves everyone he see and makes meal for them. You will also see a lot of information dump and he shows differences POV just to make the ep longer. After saving the first girl and just by eating meal together, he wants to kiss the girl when he is leaving. I have read a lot of novels and Mc in dire situation is where he do something impossible or in very extreme situations. Here? you will see a lot of almost death situations because The author wants to show character development. And He was saved by so call 'Plot Armor'. The novel is funny in so many way. I gave 3 stars because all authors should at least get it. Not because it is to my liking.
揭示劇透 Hello. Author is here again with another review. I think there are more than 180 chapters right now, so I thought more people need to see this. Read the first review to understand the gist of my novel. I admit that the first volume, that is 52 chapters, is not as ideal as it can be. Some people mentioned that vagueness of the novel, but there's a mystery tag so you'd have to stick around to understand everything this novel is about. Others mentioned plot-armor, which I find not as overused as they think. There are many things that are a foreshadowing for later events and everything would be linked together. Anyone who read until the latest chapters knows that some of those events happened for a reason the MC didn't know about. There's some change in POVs that happened early on, but would get very rare later. Please understand. Thank you. I just wanted to clairfy this so that you, whoever is interested, to give this novel a chance to prove itself.
In starting it's felt like Solo leveling but later turned out to be a unique and interesting novel. ,🤔🤔🤔🤔🤓🤓🤓😶🤔😓😏😏😤😈😈👋⚰️🤢🤢😡🖐️🤓🤔🙄💩😱👍👮👮🚓👍🏻😋😋😷😎🤢😡🖐️🖐️
The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no
I’ll be honest I have been generous is my rating. But i want to support this novel as I find it much better then many others. I like the story, I like the fact the MC is not bloodthirty since the start and has flaws, and I like how the theory of the word has been well though. What I think that needs to be improved. Generaly the english (for a non-native) is better than many novel out there, but some passage miss a verb or we go from present to using past and it makes the reading a bit complicated. In addition the explainations of the world theory are sometimes confusing wich is sad as we can guess the author put a lot of efforts in it. The plot is a bit forced and the swich to different point of view/secondary characters without a clear introduction or cut makes the reading sometimes very difficult (but still the story is better than many out there!) The only thing that really makes me furous is to see how cluless the MC is of the world outside. I know he is a dropout but still he must has been exposed at school or home in is pre-teens to all the magical parts of his world ... right now it feels he is as clueless as the reader regarding magic wich is in my point of view absolutely not normal and possible. This makes the MC looks stupid sometimes and I found it irritating. Keep going author! Writing is not easy! I wish your success.
it starts off decently but pretty soon you're introduced to the mc's annoying, childish, and sometimes hypocritical personality. he's also very stupid. a lot of his decisions are stupid, and he's very emotional - not in a good way. emotions are fine, but they're annoying when the only thing they do to a character is limit them and make it frustrating to read. he's also kind of hypocritical. early on when he goes into the world where time has stopped outside and everyone has to get insignias or whatever, he decides to destroy the world (the fake world, not earth) because a lot of people will die otherwise. but it's just stupid and hypocritical because everyone in that world decided to be there knowing the risks and knowing they may die. why does he have any right to destroy the world and "save" all these people from the risks? the mc is really annoying, so i had to drop it
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Average-face trope novel..don't know why authors LOVE average-looking mcs but let me tell you 'I don't. I don't know with you guys but I find this kind of novel "Unattractive" lowers the beauty of the novel and my interest in it. Story is so-so + Average looks = bad novels (for me)
I am soooo annoyed by this novel and sad for the Mc, honestly author tell me truth .... are you a sadist or something ? I can't even 😥😥😥 ...
Really enjoying the authors work so far. I like how he tries to explain his process and thought process for the development of the main character. Some more details of how expansive the world is would help understand the scope. Learning through the eyes of a low class citizen who is learning more of how his world works helps ease into things without being drowned in detail.
I implore you to atleast read till chapter 50 things happen for a reason, there is an underlying plot behind everything🥰 dun be too quick to judge, I don't wanna hint at anything because it would be too spoiler-y 😏 and mc is the type that goes through some serious character development all in all, an awesome read I know where my power stones are going for a long time
hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel. pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent. to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes. 2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting. 3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble. 4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype. cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow. 2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself. 3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
first of all I find this story absolutely refreshing and very good read. the story is about a guy who's working very hard to support his family after his father went missing ,he tried very hard to keep things together even dropping out of school doing menial jobs as a potter and such which is considered a absolutely dangerous task in such a dungeon crawling world though MC'S father is involved in a huge conspiracy (at least I think so as author is very mysterious about it) then in one such job he gets a legacy (read to find out what that is) and he did what he does best trying to keep things together. overall this is a very interesting read full of twist and suspens .
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honestly I was surprised. I started this randomly, and the beginning of the story felt very generic and bland. However, soon after, the pace started picking up, the plot thickened and the story became intriguing. The characters get interesting with depth and mostly the story stopped being predictable!! it's a pretty good novel that's underrated and it keeps getting better and better.