摘要
We all have something sinister inside us. Some take their demons and flaunt them to the world. Others hide them on the inside, and some believe they are pure, too pure to have a monster inside them. Yet those people are lying, whether it be to themselves or to the ones around them. The world is full of sinners, everywhere you go you'll find them. No one is pure... and no one is safe.
Over two hundred fifty years ago, a rock fell from the heavens. Inside that rock was a creature of unknown origin all humanity knew, was that this creature would change the world as they knew it.
From the everyday person emerged a new species of man, the Variant. The Variant was one capable of lifting cars and trains as if they were balls of yarn, or flying above the clouds with immense speed, even sending out waves of bright lighting.
Variants changed the world forever and were still evolving it now in the present day. Out of the Eight billion on planet earth just about twelve percent of those are of Variant blood but compared to those only a select few shine above.
Handsome, rich, and powerful. The three things any man would want to be. But what about when you are all three? Kaine Lenoir; a respected Variant, classmate, and international star. But with almost unlimited power in a world with finite restrictions what happens when that power goes unchecked?
And then begins to spiral out of control?
Genre-
Realistic Fiction
Sub-Genres-
Psychological Thriller, Action, Superheros, Dark Sci-Fi
Age Rating-
PG-13 Warning: Mild Profanity, Mild Sexual Content, Gore, and Violence.
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Hi, once again I am im kalikk, author of this story. And this will be my official review and project goals! This isn’t my first novel, as I had one years ago on Wattpad, which surpassed my expectations as in the audience number and feedback. This story is a melting pot of all the stories and ideas I have written and not finished and dreamed of, as well as the stories I have read and wished were written. I do believe I am a capable author, certainly not the best and certainly not the worst. Writing Quality: I do believe that my ability to convey a promising story is well... promising. I know there will be mistakes, but seeing as English IS my first; language I will very much try to catch any mistakes within a day of releasing. I pride myself on descriptive, tantalizing, and immersive writing. SO, I hope these appease you. 4.5/10 Stability of Updates: Yikes... This as an author is the worst obstacle I face, which happens to also be one of the biggest things a reader is eager to see. What good Is a remarkable story if it only updates once a year? After seeing, reading, and hearing more engagement and people wanting this story I absolutely will begin to deliver increasingly. 2/5 Story Development: Like I said before I am very capable of immersive writing, and I desperately hope this is visible to you all as the readers. I plan on this story being 5-600 chapters, with 4 seasons/arcs/volumes. 5/5 Character Design: Good, not great. I could practice some more, yet I do enjoy what I've created. I hate reading stories with 2-d characters, girls that fall in love over the smallest thing, male characters you seem robotic (not intentionally) and things of the sort. I will try my absolute hardest to make every single character realistic. 100/5 World Background: Seeing as this story takes place on Earth, not much is different about the world itself. But the actual power scaling, politics, and plot progression is what keeps the world moving. 4/5 So, I hope you are willing to give this book a shot, so hope you enjoy it!
Hi! I’m… im Kalikk? Haha, anyway these is just my own greedy 5 star review. I will happily post an actual review after this. But is the story worthy of 5 stars? Read and find out..
NOTE: As i've continued writing I've noticed a whole lot of mistakes, not with grammar or spelling but with continuity, certain details and names I've gotten wrong. I'll try to fix it as I go on, but please get through like the first four chapters and I promise you it will be worth it.