/ Action / Legacy of the Fallen World
摘要
Léandre's life had always been ordinary at best.
He and Alix, his childhood friend, try to live their high school lives at the fullest, all the while trying to figure their feelings toward one another.
Or at least it's what should have been.
Instead, unbeknownst to all, an event that would change the entire Universe's fate occurred.
Little did Léandre know, that this would be the start of his struggles against existence itself.
Parental Guidance Suggested
標籤
你也許也喜歡
It's just the first chapter but for now it looks promising. The chemistry between the two main characters seems to work well. Might be just a matter of preference but I think it'd be better if you could find a way to "tell" more their relationship rather than show, if you know what I mean. Sometimes you insisted a bit too much on "they know what the other think because they're childhood friends". I don't think that you need to really express that they know each other so well that often, just one or two times should be enough. Show it with conversation or actions between the two. Other than that, can't wait to see where it goes and how the title of the novel comes in the story. Good luck !