摘要
Aren was born without emotions. He couldn’t feel happiness, sadness, or even loneliness. He was unable to connect with his family or surroundings; the world always felt distant to him. Yet this never seemed like a deficiency to him, because he had no concept of what it meant to feel. Over time, he grew accustomed to living with this emptiness, relying solely on his intellect to understand the emotions of others.
But then, a fight changed everything. For the first time, Aren felt emotions—pleasure, wildness, and a torrent of complex feelings that made time seem to slow down. This experience both shocked and captivated him. Somehow, this new discovery felt like it had completed a missing part of him.
Gradually, Aren began to realize that what had blocked his emotions was, in fact, a unique ability within himself. But what would learning to control this ability bring him? What path would he be led down as he uncovered emotions he had never experienced before?
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First let me start of by saying the reasons I like this novel. The main selling point is the unusual ability of MC to control insects and his merciles persona. Besides that, I personally think the interaction with the spider girl, Victoria is very cute. I always appreciate a good romance inside a novel—not too dramatic, nor too light—along with strong action sequences. If these two factors remain consistent throughout the novel, I might give it a full read until it's finished. I don't think a brilliant writing quality is necessary to attract someone like me, as long as it's not unbearable grammer or too AI generated, its fine. I don't know in which direction the story is shaping—this early in the novel, so I can't really comment about that. Though, I can feel you are trying to build something solid with the flow it's going. Honestly, and I mean I'll be very frank; I'm in it for the spider girl and well made characters, each having a distinct personality. As for the aspects you can improve on: when shifting from a emotion invoking scene to a different one—completely unrelated to it, try not to include too much details or added information in the following scene. I'm saying this because people, when already stirred with emotions beforehand, tend to skim past the long paragraphs filled with information, because they are forced to surrender the emotional content they felt earlier. Now onto the world building. I feel like you can improve on it; you know... adding a bit more depth and information about the world, or perhaps highlighting the surrounding atmosphere and vibes. Consistent upload schedule is always a given. There is no compromise in this, if you want to have a successful novel in this app, especially at the start. And yea, that's about it.. nothing more I can critique on. Keep up the good work P.S: all of these are simply my personal opinions, and I never claim to be an expert. also P.S: I'm a HUGE sucker for good fluffy romance, and action scene.
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This has one of the best potentials ive seen in a novel in a while. It could become great with the way the writer is producing the story. Props to him
WOW, this novel is too perfect. The writing quality is excellent, and the plot seems to be well arranged it's almost too good to be true, but here it is, it's not every day you would find a perfect villain novel with reasons and to think I'm just at the 4th chapter hohoho how exciting 😀 😊 😄 really I'm loving this already i would've loved to explain more of my reasons for liking this but I'm not a fan of writing too much haha
I don’t know if it will help much but I was enjoying the story and I think it has potential I don’t know if you’ll continue it but good luck bro
Just started this story a few days ago and have to say, it's overall pretty good. Starting off with the merits would obviously include the fact the the MC is a villian so if you're looking for that, you'll get it here, the power system in the story has quite a bit of potential to be pretty interesting if the author goes more into it and the side characters at least by ch 31 so far seem to be interesting enough and they're not just useless backround characters. Though it does have it's demerits, one of which would include the story pace being a bit too fast at least earlier in the novel and due to that some of the formed character relationships in the story seem a bit abrupt and out of place for a bit. Also the fact the at least as far as i've read (chapter 31), the first few numbered chapters can nearly be skipped with the only real relavance they've had in the sotry being explaing the MC's personality a bit. Though overall it's a pretty good novel so far. But i'll have to keep reading to see if it gets any better in the future as it does a some potential.
All this prince, empire and vex stuff reminds me of HxH. I think it would be good to add more characters. It was fun to read, keep writing. this book has potential.
I'm fairly new to writing novels, so there may be mistakes or inconsistencies that I haven't noticed. But I'm doing my best to improve as I go. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask, and don't hesitate to share any feedback you might have. Constructive criticism will really help me grow. Thank you in advance for your interest