Kumo desu ga, Nani ka? - Edit System

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ParodyGirl

Shameless author here. About this story, I really like Kumo desu ga and decided to write a fanfic. It probably won't be to everyone's taste, but I hope many people like it. The story will focus on adventure, character interaction and evolution, especially at the beginning. I haven't decided if I'll write "Lemons" yet, but maybe I will in the future. Thanks for reading!

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The_Dark_Hydrax

I hope this doesn't mean you'll stop writing the hotel story...

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Fu_Hua_

..........say no more....................

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DaoistTVJPRH

Me gusta. Estoy deseando ver cómo continuará la historia. The personality of the protagonist is also good. And has an interesting ability.

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Deathly_Rose

Overall, the story is good, but the whole power scale balancing is completely off. The farther you get into the story the less words are written, and a lot of the chapters are just a scenario being described from multiple points of view, or just filler text that takes up the whole chapter. Also at the latest chapter, the main character has already reached a point where he may be considered unrivaled. Even if he does go lower into the labyrinth by the time he gets there, he’ll be way stronger than he is now. For those who don’t know or a first time readers, he has the ability to boost his own stats, at this point in the story he can edit his stats all the way up to 50,000. And if I remember correctly the stat limit is 150,000. This means there’s nothing that can truly hinder him in the dungeon since his growth rate is so fast. another thing that bothers me about the story is that he constantly makes choices that are either stupid or contradicting what he just said. One such example of this is when he saw the mother spider and he said I better run away while she’s doesn’t know I’m here and two sentences later he’s engaged in battle with her, and somehow he wins. The mother spider in question seems to not be a good fighter, even though it is lived for so long and has reached level 89. I would continue this review, but I truly held anyone’s attention for this long

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ShuraZero

Anteriormente dejé una reseña negativa en otra obra de éste autor, sin embargo en cuanto a éste fanfic para mí es una buena historia, me gusta la interacción que tiene el protagonista con kumoo, algo que corregiría es que debes hacer que ella sea más fuerte porque el progreso que está haciendo el protagonista es a través de los monstruos que kumo debió cazar, así provocando que ella no se vuelva fuerte y no pueda evolucionar

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_DEKIM_

a true rare gem. a perfect romance in every aspect. the author really has talent. one of the best romances on the platform.🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩✨🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨🤩🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨

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jackson_smith

I can't stop reading this fanfiction since it is so good ParodyGirl here is a new fantasy fanfiction idea: Our MC Jack Sandarac after successfully passing a trial by a ROB gets put into the World of Game of Thrones after he dies from getting shot in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to live his best life. He is reborn into House Tyrell. Smart Mc Cunning Mc Alpha Mc Strategic Mc Mc will be cold to enemies that threaten his loved ones and his women Harem Cersei Lannister Catelyn Stark Miranda Royce Genna Lannister Jeyne Poole Sansa Stark Lysa Tully Roslin Frey Joyeuse frey

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Lamenting_Devil

5 Star for the best spiderrr!!! i hope you continue the work as a fan like you i really like the whole anime unfortunately no season two yet so please, all the best.

Love it. Never seen the original series but you do a great job with the concept. Thank you for the story. Keep it up ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

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DaoisthtEx3D

I can't stop reading this story I liked it quite a bit (This was translated by Google so I don't know if reading it is too noticeable or not)

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Danie123

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Lord_Aizen_Lvl9999

i don't know what to but " KEEPT IT UP AUTHOR " and more chapter please ;>

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Shadowlord96

What can i say one of the best kumoko ff, this is one of the few ff novels that i enjoy reading,best of luck and GIVE ME MORE

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hernanrodris

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Elon_Husk

only 21 chapters in well 23 if you count the prologue and auxiliary chapter but after binge reading it to the latest chapter this is definitely a promising fanfic that I'll look forward to reading. Good job author keep up the great work

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Emptyentity

The work is definitely decent enough for a fanfic. There are a couple of aspects that can be improved, though, especially the behavior of the MC: more confidence in difficult situations and a less panicking mind would be great. The writing quality is okay-ish, with minor mistakes here and there. Keep up.

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Cultivator_Asura

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