/ Anime & Comics / Kryptonian queen in Marvel
摘要
A boy reincarnated as power girl in Marvel's comic mix MCU and he/she will live for herself in this new world with no restrain.
First time writing.
I'm not English so grammar is not my friend but I try my best.
Absolutely not a author by vocation just for fun.
I own nothing.
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The grammar is terrible. It is hard to follow, The mc is a guy who asks to be a girl with a retractable Slong, the gods feel extremely weird.
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
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need more chapters so please please please please start writing more. really really really really really like the story. [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp]
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