/ Urban / Kill The Protagonist
摘要
Bored of all the average looking male leads who somehow get a harem and become OP?
Well allow me to introduce. Jin Yagami, a 16 year old boy who hates cliché!
What happens if one day he dies while trying NOT to be a hero.
Follow his journey of restoring the Universe to how it was meant to be before all these good for nothing protagonists had their way with it.
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Wow, this is definitely a good novel, hope you update this regularly. A fresh take on villain self insert where instead of being a fix it fic, embrace the role of villainy and aim to eradicate the protagonist instead. Hopefuly you can focus on this fic and pump out more chapters, really looking forward to it
Good plot, I like the creativity it just needs better implementation of characterization for example the king should stay in character of being a prideful asshole of a king so he should know better than to beg on his knees. And of course structuring a good plot is the key if you want this story to be good and not stray to the wrong path. A little more work on your choice of words but overall its good i like the idea of the mc fighting through the stigma of clichéd novels.
Giving this a chance as author's previous book was good.... ........(140 chars) ......................................................,.......,..............
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Loved the story.. i can't wait for the next chapter.. Please keep up the Good Work..
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Writing quality? Idk i suck at grammer Stability? Only 6 chpt for now so idk but its pretty good considering his other novel Development? Idk one sh!t about development lol Character？MC is scheming and badass, i like Background? Idk what actually is happing so yea...idk Story’s great thou, try it out, you will not regret it(depends on your taste but yeah)