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Limitless The Strongest Revenant

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作者: Yinghuo_392

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"If you intended to die anyway, don't die quietly like a pussy! Go out in a fucking blaze of glory!"
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John Smith, an average man who dies heroically, is given a choice in the afterlife: pass on or return as a Revenant to battle the undead in hell. He chooses the latter and is granted a {Fate} known as {Rewind}, which allows him to reset his condition—including health, stamina, and ammo—to a previous point.

Harnessing {Rewind}, John takes up firearms to fight the undead. Each zombie he kills earns him $200, rapidly amassing a fortune that surpasses Earth's wealthiest. With his newfound riches, he upgrades his arsenal to include tanks, planes, and even nukes.

During his journey, John encounters the Seven Sirens, a group of powerful and alluring female Revenants. By helping them confront their personal demons, he earns their affection and devotion. Through intimate exchanges, John acquires each Siren’s {Fate}, further amplifying his powers.

Now known as Limitless, John, alongside his harem of powerful female Revenants, leads a cataclysmic war that will determine humanity's future as its strongest Revenant.

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Author Notes:
Harem size: 7 | No NTR | No Yuri | No Grape
Novel Focus: Action, Adventure, Urban Fantasy, Reincarnation, Dark, Weak to Strong, Battle Harem, Beautiful Heroines, YANDERE Heroine, Military, Loyal Subordinates, Kingdom Building, War, Politics, Conspiracies, Overpowered, Face Slapping, Tragedy, Character Development, Multiple POVs, Betrayal, Alternate Realities, Demons, Zombies, Superpowers, Tower Climbing, Tower Defense, Wish fulfillment.

I have paid for and own the copyrights to both the cover and character images.

Official Discord link https://discord.gg/7yxSzd3szy, See you there!

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    Yinghuo_392

    Hello, Seeing as I have written this book to over 500 chapters for the last eight months, I feel like I earned the right to give myself another review. (To balance out the two braincell incels who cannot read tags.) Many things have changed since I began writing this for one people actually read it now. But in all seriousness If I were to rate my work it would still be a five. Because of the following reasons. 1. I have uploaded consistently for over 220 days as of this writing. (With multiple mass releases in between) While my Priv is expensive, I believe it is worth the price my readers pay for it. 2. My grasp of flow has vastly compared to what it once was. (So much so looking at my older chapters makes me annoyed.) 3. John and the Seven Sirens are multifaceted characters who I wrote very well. They have fears, dreams, quirks and personalities that give life to them as real people. (Give their character pages some love!) Unlike most harem book. my girls kick A! a lot of it. they are not damsels in distress, and you see how they fall in love with my MC in the Heroine Chapters in their POV. They need John as much as he needs them. and they argue, they fight but they still find their way back to each other. This is what I believe a harem should be. and I hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing them. 4. My lore. I am quite proud of how I managed to tie so many different bits of history, mythology and fantasy. together. and like an onion, the readers accompany John as he learns and finds his place in the world. Hard to say anything because I don't want to spoil anything, but many have praised the lore. And if you give it some time, I am sure you will too. 5. Finally, the love and dedication I have given this book. With over 650,000 words as of this writing. Suffice to say I have written a lot. This book earned peanuts during the first 6 months (Missed my first MGS). However, I felt that even if it did not earn anything I wanted to finish it. I already dropped two books prior to this. The first one no one read, the second because the book died when I got covid. I wanted this book to be different. Quality wise, my work has a high standard. Unlike most authors my status screens are small. I also actively try to make them even smaller. I do not waste chapters on needless things. Each side character, each event are all part of the overarching story. Meaning of the 500 chapters up to this point. I am proud to say I do not have even one filler chapter. Each chapter is written to drive the plot forward. Apart from the research needed, each chapter needs about 2 hours. so, you can only guess how long the 500 chapters took. For reference, for my honeymoon (Smut) volume Elysium. I needed to research over 2 days before I wrote a single word. Quite happy with how it came out. Need to wrap this up. But yeah. this book is awesome. the characters are flawed, relatable and show us how even in the depths of hell, hope and joy can exist. If this work has given you some nuggets of wisdom. if it made you chuckle as the characters bond with one another. if it made your blood rush as you wondered what would happen next. Please support it. I offer all my work for Limitless to my God in heaven, to Jesus Christ my king. to whom without, I would not have been able to endure the hardship to continue writing this book. And to everyone who has supported Limitless but has stopped, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. I wish for you people all the happiness in the world. To those that read and found my work boring. Thank you for your time. I hope you find a book that brings you joy. Finally, to the readers who support the work and join me in each chapter. Thank you all. Buckle in your seats and prepare for an epic Journey. Kiss your harem in love, and lock and load. Because I promise you this. by the time Limitless has concluded. it would be a journey unlike any other. May your fate, end the darkness.

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    4mth
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    sasaki1012

    1 - References about countries, like Brazil, shape a bit about how your characters act and think. 2 - Intelligent Dialogues, as your characters are conceived from a point of view, they are concrete, they have a way of thinking and speaking based on their past, the place they live, etc. 3 - Good Premise, I really enjoy books about the apocalypse and yours presents a unique take that I hadn’t read about before. There are some similar ones, but not exactly the same. It has everything to be a great story intertwining the present day with the hell gate. 4 - Emotion and fantasy, I really liked how you make your readers want to read the next chapter and then the next, because you really want to know how the book continues, you keep wondering how the MC will get out of this situation, or what he will do, and what you would do if you were in his place, often you can't find a better way to do what the MC did, which is great, it means there’s someone thinking behind the plot. 5 - Book made for adults, and lastly, it’s a book that is not meant for children or teenagers, with comedies in situations that would never fit in real life, many animes and light novels are like that, like One Piece for example. There is blood, death, and cruelty where it normally should be in real life, or at least if we were in that situation, I haven't seen if there's 18+ content, but I hope it does, as it really is part of life.

    2mth
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    PageSaint

    So far I'm really enjoying this book, please do not stop. I can only speak from my own perspective, but the storyline and characters are well developed. The story isn't over the top in any one direction, which gives it a nice balance. The POV chapters add a good amount of depth to both main and side characters. [img=More pls] Keep up the good work!

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    Yinghuo_392

    Hello everyone, Mandatory Author review. This is my latest novel which I worked very hard on. It's about the story of an average nobody in his journey to become the strongest king in the world. MC will get a total of seven love interests. No Yuri, No NTR. No Grape. Book is in 1st person for the ultimate self-insert. MC has unique powers but is not overpowered at the beginning. Story will be separated between bits where the MC and the heroines are in hellsgate and back on earth. (Kinda like a VR game but with higher stakes). The MC cannot use fantasy weapons but will instead use Real life arms ranging from guns, bombs, tanks to even nukes. all arms and vehicles in the novel would have real life counterparts. The heroines are not wallflowers and are all fighters that will serve as the MC's squad. They too will be armed with modern arms. Main enemy of the story is the undead the MC and the Heroines are forced to fight against every night. But they will also fight political plots and have wars between every continent on the planet. The book will be comprised of Action, kingdom building and adventure. There would be romance but not enough to be considered one of the books core themes. Please note that this is a work of fiction and any similarities between people and places and events, are purely coincidental. Art for the Heroines and the Cover is done by Baswara Arts Editing is done by a paid Editor by the name of IkuSaari I hope you enjoy what this book has to offer. Enjoy the read.

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    David_Hughes_9017

    So far an amazing story. Picked it up today and had no choice but binge it all to the most current chapter. I can't wait for more

    8mth
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    Memelord420

    Great book, both serious moments and funny moments. It's one of the few books I'll be keeping up with from now on. I can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the great work!!👍👍

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    DeathWalker

    It’s a novel that needs more attention in my honest opinion. Author has done an amazing job creating a story that has a lot of hidden potential. Awesome story homie.

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    1yr
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    Todd_Peters

    How dare you make a story that plays on my emotions in such a variety of ways! Take my coins and votes you monster... but keep uploading. now this story runs from exciting fights to seeling of sadness in a wild whirlwind to a story highly recommended

    5mth
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    Pancho_Uy

    Very well written, fast paced and with an original approach, I can say this novel is a joy to read so far (around chap 30). Darkness and humor intertwine and seem well balanced. Contrasting with other novels, where mysteries are wrapped in confusing paragraphs, we learn about them along with the MC. Oh, in case you wonder, yes, he has a really, really broken op cheat, but it manifests gradually. I look forward for his develeopment. Speaking of which, world and character development feel somewhat lacking, but this is just at the start, so I am confident. Keep the good work, Author Sama!

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    The_AM
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    I liked it a lot at first i thought it was intresting, with a lot of potential. However when the mc started taking needless risk, and didn't care about anything including living or dying as long as it was on his terms. I started to feel likethewtory was contradicting itself. At first hei s really mad at himself for dying even though it was his choice to interfere with the lady he saved. Hoever now he doesn't care if lives or dies as long as it's on his terms. I mean hejustgot another chance it feels so foolish to just throw it away because hes cocky and reckless.

    3mth
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    Abbys_Chronicle66

    The main character, John Smith, is reborn with an incredible power that makes him super strong but still believable. The female characters are really well-written, and their relationships with John feel genuine. In just two weeks of the story's timeline, the plot covers over 500 chapters and stays exciting throughout. This webnovel is perfect if you love a mix of action and fantasy with great character development. Highly recommend!

    4mth
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    KFCmicchicken

    I really like this book and hope it sticks around for the long run. I have to hand it to the author hes really creative with the MC abilities

    4mth
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    Sinbad_not_bad

    The action sequences dull and predictable. Furthermore, the world-building lacks coherence, with glaring inconsistencies that detract from immersion. Characters are thinly developed, serving as mere vehicles for the protagonist's power fantasies rather than compelling individuals with depth and complexity. Overall, "Limitless" fails to deliver on its promise, offering little more than a shallow and unconvincing spectacle.

    4mth
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    Berzerius

    You can see the care and effort put into this novel. This has become my favourite novel in this app. Apart from the harem setting, nothing in this novel follows your typical stereotypes.

    4mth
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    Jimmy_Kibble

    I wish I could read more the story is amazing

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    Call_Me_King93

    Figured it was time to do a review, since starting this novel I have enjoyed it since the start. The story is amazing combining our worlds history with the new Reaper world and they fit together so nicely. The character development of the Sirens and John is wonderful seeing how they all have changed since the start. Updates very frequently so I don't have to wait long to continue with the story. I absolutely recommend this book, it does take some time to get going and there is a lot of backstory that has to be covered but it is worth reading.

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    Hultzy
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    Well the simple thing I can say about this story is that if you hate political correctness this is the story for you. This story shows the regular world not the people who pump and stands for political gain or to be a part of a movement. This story shows that every ethnicity can be racist can come together and work together even if they don't like each other for a greater purpose. The second Amendment of the United States in this story is on display and shows the reason for owning a firearm as a citizen. I am very grateful to the author for pulling apart some very poor excuses for American politics and puts them on display and shows that most of them are foolish if not harmful overall to people mental health and stability.

    6mth
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    johnopedia

    What can I say? writing quality is ok and getting better. I've added corrective comments, and the author reads them. The story development is good, though at times I find myself wishing it would move faster. The characters all have their background and trauma that they're working through. Their back stories provide a way for the author to build the world. Updates are regular so far.

    6mth
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    MDTH0
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    Don't like harem and romance because the MCs are usually simps and this novels MC is definitely one and I can see that just from the synopsis so this one is definitely trash to me.😐

    4mth
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    IkuSaari

    Okay-ish. Very uneven, with strong points being authentic character moments and funny lines, and the main problem being the writing itself. It's a bumpy ride, but definitely prone to evolving into something smoother. I wouldn't lose all hope, but instead maybe like glue the author to a computer for research and practice, practice, practice. If it's hopeless, it doesn't deserve 2.4, but this is a 2.8 and that's because there is hope. Some fun things: John being John, gorilla, Bella

    1yr
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    AltAccc

    I'm surprised that this story was hidden on webnovel for so long. Compared to 99% of novels here this book is better in every aspect, it's original, characters and background are interesting as well as writing quality, which doesn't have mistakes for a not focused eye. Considering how the book started some insanity in characters isn't bad, though sometimes sudden over-cringe moments happen, even then they are short so it's not a big problem. I'm happy that i clicked onto the recommendation(or whatever it was) picture when i opened the app. Let's just say that {fate} brought me here xD

    3mth
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    vegarke
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    its fine,not good not great just fine feels like a chore to read

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