/ Anime & Comics / Jumping Through Life With Magic By Your Side (Jumpchain)
摘要
The end of my rope came and I being the sane individual I was had accepted the end yet life was not done with me yet it seems. What was that saying again? "End? No, the journey doesn't end here. Death is just another path... One that we all must take." Now its time to explore some worlds and see how far I can go.
Wait Magic Is Real?!
Can I Cast Fist?!
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寫檢討
It's not a bad fic, one inconsistency or another with the HP canon that despite being an HP fanfic scenario is a change without meaning or reason which ends up damaging the reading a little. The biggest problem with this fic is how the protagonist, even without having studied any magic, pulls spells out of nowhere and with a little study using books bought in stores he is already capable of dealing with curses left by Voldemort. The Author is treating Merlin's advantage as if it were an automatic gain of knowledge rather than an immense talent that still requires study and research. Even though at one point or another it has been mentioned that the MC has studied the books he bought, it still shouldn't put his knowledge on the level of someone like Voldemort.
I'm here as always this author is not a disappointment and i can say this fic is pretty good so go check it.
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