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Jumpchain: A wish and a jump later

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作者: Alazarel

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Disclaimer: This is one of my first writing projects. I mostly read I don't nomaly write. And most of what I read is on sights like this. My english grades were atroshious in school, and my spelling was worse. "A book is a project that has ben abandoned" (Mark Stavish), and I haven't abandoned this project yet. So, there may be sweeping changes to it. I also wrote most of this on my phone as a hobby project without an editor for myself. I don't own any of the source material. This project is just for fun, and because I have found it, the joy of writing.

What you probably need to know to enjoy this. I haven't satisfactorily written a vershon of the first world ,"Alterworld by D Rus," yet. I don't really have plans to do so in this project. Alterworld is its own project.

For all of you, Mc loving readers with your minds in the gutter, this is not a fan service pice. it may become more of that, but I don't have any fans and am plenty capable of imagining that just fine. and there is plenty of stuff to write about without that taking up half my time.

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Bloodawn

You have so much potential with this story, if you fix the grammar, it would be great.

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ThatGuyYeahThatGuy

Potential is there. Just as any classic jumpchain fic. But the grammar and the pace would need some improvement. Can't really review deeply with less than 10 chap. Either way, good start, and hopefully good story. I'm waiting it's evolution with baited breath. [img=recommend]

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