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Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
4.51 (74 評分)
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Woke up as Yuji Itadori
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4.51
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it's rare for a good jjk fic and from you author I can only imagine it being good
So, I'd sadly not recommend reading this: the story's pacing is absurd (seriously, this was just bad storytelling), the characters are about as bland as they come, scene and character description are almost completely absent, and the author is thinking about accelerating the pacing even more (I'm on chapter 13). I'm kinda annoyed that I got my expectations up when reading the first chapter; it had pretty good spelling, an enjoyable writing style, and was just... interesting.
The story is very good! I recommend it to anyone who wants to read it! I think the only point that didn't make the story 5 stars for me but 4.6 is because the story has no stability in writing and the author hasn't updated for more than 20 days.....
Didn't had any hope but man, the fights are done great yes sometimes pacing is just fine but NOT BAD, yuji has very well developed character in here, realistic THERE IS ONLY 1 PROBLEM, give other chracter more depth i mean you already have with their fights but try to slow down a little giving the reader more about their personal views and day to day problems it will help them connect better, (STILL TOP LEVEL JJK FAN-FIC)
good story. really interesting. only problem i have is the inconsistent uploading and the fact that the author cant get genders right. good story would recommend otherwise
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The biggest problem is that it reads like a translation, or perhaps the authors first language isn't english. There are loads of inconsistencies with the characters- speech being the biggest. Gojo speaks OOC, the MC overcomplicating sentences etc. It's a glaring issue, but one you can sort of ignore if you try hard enough.
Incredibly bland. That is how I would summarise this story. Mind numbing start with a lifeless mc who, I admit, does get a bit more tolerable over the course of the story, yet simply feels like a more mature, not stupid yuji. There is no individuality to him at all. The power progression is good, if put in a vacuum. Give it context and the battles are TERRIBLE. Excessively drawn out so as to keep cannon the same. He doesn't learn from his mistakes, yaps constantly, no sense of urgency when he should know better, doesn't capitalise on opportunities, and then complains when shit doesn't go his way. No planning before the shibuya incident at all that could circumvent 90% of the problems he encountered. Would background is not expanded on at all, and the world feels incredibly small. The writing quality is average, nothing much to say there. I found myself skipping the next three chapters the moment kinjaku appeared (during yuji and mahito fight), it was so forced that I couldn't bear to read it. So overall, a bit below average in terms of plot (however little there is lol) with acceptable writing quality and a lacklustre mc who doesn't seem to impact the story at all even with his tremendous boost in power compared to Canon yuji. Very disappointing, but expected.
Я уже ранее писал отзыв, но решил немного его отредактировать. Ваша работа действительно интересна - я искал не мало рассказов по JJK или с самоставкой, но ваша, на мой взгляд, одна из лучших. Не могу дать комментарий по поводу орфографии или пунктуации, так как сам читаю работу, переведенную на русский язык. Поэтому автор, тебе вдохновения, и чтобы все у тебя было хорошо. И большое спасибо за работу, которая даёт возможность отдохнуть
The story at the start mostly follows canon,The shibuya arc is where the real changes begin and there will be a lot of yuji glazing,overall I really like this story,The only complaint is that the author does not update consistently and the chapters are rather short
l'histoire est bonne etr les interactions sont plutot bonnes on s'en bien quil reste une part de yugi en lui car certaines partie jai limpression de voir un meilleur version de yugi ou si yugi avait ete mieux prepare
Bien bien gracias por el capítulo y la familia no me deja entrar a las 2 de mi jente de mi parte de mi parte de mi parte de mi parte de la risa de mi vida en el cole de mi vida no puedo hablar contigo y me da la razón si te parece que no me deja el móvil en el metro y no tengo nada de tiempo de
awesome story i hope you continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's one of the better fanfics found on this platform. The author knows the canon very well, so it's quite fun to read. I hope it doesn't follow the canon too much and doesn't deviate as well. Might change my mind and give it a solid 5 in future if the plot gets more interesting. I like how there's no unnecessary forced romance as well. Keep going, Mr Author. 👏🏽👏🏽
No originality whatsoever the author of this fanfic just follows the anime 99% of the story. No new arcs or events happening, the MC who got reincarnated acts as if he is Yuji. I am too disappointed. Except for the writing quality which I will give five star, everything else received one star.