摘要
Dan finaly bought the new CDVR headset especially made for the newest mysterious game released with it. A very interactive world full of adventures, wars and competition, free to be discovered without the danger of PRO and P2W players.
Because the characters don't always follow what the player wants.
What will happen?
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I need a review for better exposure, so I'll be shameless this once. I actually think this is a good story with concept, I try my best to listen to my readers opinions to shape the story as good as I am able. The updates will be 1-2 chapters per week since right now I am also working and don't have all day to sit behind a computer. Hope to read some constructive reviews :3
This is actually pretty interesting so far, even without immediate action that some people would use to draw in a reader, but i personally really like world building to begin with. Can't wait to see how the combat systems and styles turn out, really looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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Only a handful of chapters rn, but so far is a great idea with plenty of plotortunities and original aspects- good luck finding those nowadays. Only issues are basic spelling or grammar- hardly issues-can't wait to see how the story pans out!
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I am writing this review right here because this novel needs more exposure and I cannot be bothered to think stuff up to make this ****e believable but I truly do like this novel as such I'm giving it 5 stars, yes FIVE stars. Not that much is it~
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