/ Anime e Quadrinhos / is it wrong to try to build a criminal Empire? Danmachi x MHA
摘要
After his crushing defeat by All Might, All For One finds himself in the world of Danmachi. Watch as our "hero" rises, facing trials and fierce competitions as he navigates the challenges of this new realm.
Notice: IT'S A SLOW BUILD!!
please don't come expecting AFO to beat Ottar from day one, that's not what I'm aiming for.
My aim is a realistic build up of power, While not going out of the way of the Canon danmachi world.
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寫檢討Each chapter is well-written, the story has a interesting premise and a more mature take on danmachi. I look forward to see where this goes.
It's perfect, it's exactly what I always wanted to read, a new and creative idea. At the moment the story has 2 chapters but it's very good.
This is a very good fanfic. I love villain stories and AFO is one of the best. I think she has handled the development of her story very well and it doesn't feel incoherent. Highly recommended.
作者 Dier69
I think you should merge all for one and bells personalities together not making them good or bad kind of you know caring to his friends and family but everyone else is just thing make him like a anti-villain hero and you need to work on his background criminal empire shooting I do think both one does need a change a little if not he's just going to repeat everything again