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Invincible system in the multiverse (Hunter x Hunter for the moment)
2.73 (18 評分)
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A human is selected by a goddess who gives him a system
multiverse .................. .................. ............. ..... .................. .................. this is my third fanfic and yes that is doing a lot at the same time but I plan to stop one. .................. .................. .............. .... .................. .................. .......... ........ English is not my mother tongue so please do not criticize .................. ..... ............. .................. ................... ................. have fun. And here is my pattern page you can find all the works in advance:
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Absolutely terrible!!! A guy buys the strongest dragon bloodline, fights a bear then says he's not strong enough to kill the bear. The guy buys a gun but the system gives him a sword, the sword then becomes a gun. MOST IMPORANT NOTE: In HXH world but have mana like bruh, at least try to be original and have a non abiliy.
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I like this novel it is both simple and good I encourage the author to continue it for the reader. I like the fact that the mc is going to go to another world with I suppose more girl I await the continuation with impatience. Nice for machi
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Cara que lixo nao leiam isso e lixo PORFAVOR NAO COLOQUE : URSO : QUALQUER COISA ISSO E IRRITANTE COLOQUE ASPAS " ESCUTO" pronto viu isso e muito faciu
The novel idea is noting new. The story point is good with good choices. But the writing quality is horrible, plot super forced and rushed. Also how do you explaining a normal person who suddenly got a system suddenly know to to fight ?? like wtf?
Horrible only retards will give this 5 star ........ ❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎❎
everything is wrong you cant understand anything from the mc you dont know when he speaks or thinks and the system is too op like you ask a question and you get points from asking it and the most anoying thing is everything the system does he says it's too OP and it burns all your brain cells just to understand what is happening in one chapter
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Good beginning A spichal idea Good novel . Rod DEA fulfill tea hobby f and da Ohio da da da da da all of do by UK by two of do my yiJehrcl
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Thanks for the chapters keep writing, great work on every chapter, thanks for your hard working and hope you can publish more chapters in future...
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Most of the things in this book dont make sense. (asked for a gun, bought a sword). Its also quite difficult to read. Only good thing about this is that the author posts often enough.
Nevermind, the system is annoying, the MC is boring and is an ass that love to steal from people even though they showed hospitality, the spelling mistakes like Uchiwa and not Uchiha are not that deep, but a little bit of research would really help you by the way. All of a sudden the MC went from 18 to 38 or something. While i don't know if the author actually reads the complains people have or not, i don't see him replying to any of them so im just going to assume he's chosing to ignore everything we say. Males are she/her and Females are He/Him its annoying. all in all im done wasting my time here. Read at your own risk. If you just want to ignore everything i said then its a ok read
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the MC and **** 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
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Muito interessante história espero pelo próximo capítulo a história tá muito boa 👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Piece of crap MC travels to HxH world. First people that treats him a human being and he steals all their belonging saying that they shouldnt trust people so easily like he's the one in the right for stealing from them. Garbage MC deserves to die. Well garbage author for making the MC like that
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