/ Book&Literature / Into the wizarding world as Neville Longbottom
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Mc gets reincarnated as Neville Longbottom with a Daredevil system.
Watch as his antics as he tries to save the world.
George and Fred: Neville is the most Gryiffindorish person we have ever met in hogwarts!
Dumbledore: "Is the power that Voldemort does not have recklessness."
Neville Grandma: "Don't jump out the window dear, we do believe that you are a wizard!"
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This it's definitely a Chinese novel or at least looks like one. It's very uncommon the way it's wrote.......... .......... .......... .......... ..........
[img=recommend] I like it and recommend it to everyone. Great humor! It just makes my day. Please continue updating as you are doing now! Also the plot seems to make the mc do embarrassing things and balances out his knowledge about the plot .
Had a system that does dumb missions and author uses it to force plot like still being pushed out window and having use his fathers wand. Boring and just dumb af
Don't write situations where comedy will always be overshadowed by the realism a moment calls for. Kicked out a window? Anger. Resentment. Relationship changed. Railroaded into the wrong wand? Unwillingness and focus on trying to solve their problem. These are things to be expected. Humor doesn't solve these problems. Total 2.6 Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 1 Character Design 1 World Background 4
This is a good story, I like it,So don't drop this story please keep writing