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摘要
I do NOT OWN anything except mc OC and some events. The Timeline will be Wacky and our MC is an Anti-Hero not cold blood or ruthless he will kill when absolutely necessary.
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I died, got some wishes and tried to survive.
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I'm writing for fun, read if you want to don't need any money... yet. Let's see how this goes.
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Too many horny fucks who are here for harem. The rating is low because of horny teens. What Im suprised about is how much these teens like harems, like do you know how many harem fanfics there are? A shit ton is the answer. I like to read actually stories with reasonable plot rather than a harem which is only for *** but no love.
This is not a harem story the author purposely didn't put the tag so he can attract more audience to his shitty story then he has the audacity to say don't leave hate comments when he actively deceived his viewers for higher rating on the platform it's plain degenerative attitude and pethatic **** you
I honestly thought this was gonna be some good shit after i saw it in the rankings, but then i forgot that idiots like to waste their power stones on crap like this, its just your normal everyday wish fulfillment but thats not my problem with this fic because honestly who dosen't just love to read about some stupid OP MC with a harem full of girls one time or another, what pisses me of is that he's just copypasting the same generic start of most MCU fanfic out there, honestly dude atleast try to innovate on the plot instead of the same cliche start, also the grammar is shit, and there's no harem or romance, atleast until i've read which wasn't very far since i just really couldn't stand it, MC's name is really fucking weird too, so i can't be bothered to remember it.
Pretty dull read overall. When reading a marvel story you want something new. Refreshing. This is just the basic same old story... I mean it's not bad per se but just plain boring. You would think with his powers Iq etc we would see something new and initiative. It follows the route of spiderman basically. SO spiderman 2.0. You know the same old route it always follows when in that direction... So yeah not the best read but not the worst... Personally, I wouldn't waste my time on it. I would just read a spiderman si/oc story instead.
A boring and a waste of time and i always laugh when i see authors that use the tag noharem just for have more audience marvel story are perfect for do a good novel but here just nothing
Honestly I see a lot of these reviews not giving this fanfic nearly enough credit. Seriously, this is probably the best Marvel fanfic I read in a long time. Especially if the author sticks to it and continues cranking out beautiful chapters. Just absolutely amazing, would highly recommend to someone who likes Marvel. Especially for people who like comic concepts brought over into the MCU.
Well, first is that I had just finish the current chapter. Most of the sudden POV change is quite weird, random and redundant. I don't know why you include those, but it is making your story feel messy and sh1t because of it. If you want to introduce character, intro them when they really appear instead of the sudden short snip like what you do. And also the character itself. Either you neglect to start his initial character development or you start slow. Anyway, read it at your own risk everyone.
This is the first time I come across this, his desires are so simple but ingenious, I also like the possible storyline with Strange, he could be something like Tony Stark for Peter.
the grammar need improvement but because you're an fellow anti-harem take this five stars
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Masterpiece. Amazing story with great potential. One the best I've ever read on webnovel. Creativity - Top-notch. I really enjoyed the read and recommend to any of you who are interested in this story it is definitely worth your time. Just waiting for further updates.
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One of the best reads Really good Mc with a depth full personality Really good world building and many point of views that works. Overall great story OR as Magneto likes to say : PERFECTION
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Author if you read this please read it all. I do wish this story was updated a little more so i can enjoy seeing how it develops. I also have a little trouble with the writing quality but overall i ignore it to enjoy this story to its fullest. Its a great story idea and currently besides what ive mentioned there is nothing else I’d change about it. So i look forward to the continuation of this story and how it will progress further. Also if you give MC an X gene i totally vote for technomancy honestly my favorite ability out of most of them.
I really enjoy this novel. It does a good job of keeping the marvel “spirit” without being to cleache and over done. Starting out the story i was worried i wasn’t going to like the main character based on how he acts and the powers he chooses but he really grew on me as it went on.
i love this fic! keep up the great work, author-san! <3 >3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
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Shameless self promotion 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎 Writing for fun and I'll try my hardest for the MC to not be a Mary Sue and retarded idiot due to plot and character development. Not that good writing in the beginning but it'll improve I promise if I upload frequently. Read if want to a leave a review if like it, and constructive criticism are appreciated. Do not write hate comments I am not the reason you are losers in life I just wrote a novel if you don't like just leave or write some bad stuff I can't really stop you. Peace out✌️✌️ Live long and prosper 🖖