/ Book&Literature / Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Eragon)
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Reincarnated in the world of Alagaësia, Cedric Merlinson wants nothing more than to follow his namesake's example—by becoming the greatest wizard who ever lived. As far as the big bad was concerned, he couldn't care less. Power-gaming was the name of the game, and he wouldn't let anything get in the way of that.
Unfortunately for him, the road to unlimited power wouldn't be without its hurdles...
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imagine being in eragon and not getting dragon and reason being stupid like not liking dragons when its power up like brah ....................................
I'll give it a good rating, because if I do, more people might read it. And also, I don't have anything else to say, but I need more words before I can post this. Done, finally.
this will be mid to me how you gonna have a guy be reincarnated know the ins and outs of the verse has a desire to be powerful yet at the same time rejects a possible boost that will give him that strength what person willingly handicaps themselves like this and I know what happens next is gonna be some bs power ups that probably gonna be a middle finger to any type of power structure in the and this is the only reason I didnt give it a one star I wanna see how you violate the worlds consistency
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There is not much to say since there are only 5 chapters. The Eragon setting is interesting and I like that the focus is on magic.The Mc is bit too stubborn and if it was not for plot he would probably kill himself every other day cause he wants to learn magic without any kind of support. Admirable but probably very stupid cause one mistake with this kind of magic and you are dead...
Great story so far. I Hope it stays intresting and the author makes the story independent and unique even without following the whole plot.
Complete dissapointment. A dumb MC that ignores metaknowledge and a story that doesn't follow the world rules for its system of magic. He refuses to ask Brom for help and instead learns "Wild Magic" as if that's something you can just do. The stupidity and bad decision making is pretty much constant.
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It started strong, but there is so much fanfic protagonist nonsense, that I'm wondering why even bother setting in this particular universe. Could have just made it a stand alone story, idk will read a few more chapters before deciding to continue/drop.
Keep it up!!!! Love this FF One of the the few Eragon Fictions out there…. Does anybody knew others?
Morrrrrrrrreeeeeeeee, there aren’t enough Eragon fics now I haven’t read them in a long time, but it’s been going very good so far keep up the good work author.
Pretty solid read, I can't say I completely agree with the mc's view on dragons and the way he is learning magic and defying the laws set by the world's magic system, but each story has its flaws, I can't expect a story to be perfect on all fronts, aside from that this is actually a really good fic, definitely going to my library, can't wait for more updates.
This is so far a really well written story and with an interesting premise that dosent seem to simply follow the original plot, but could still allow the mc to interfere with the plot. I'm interested to see how this may expand on the original magic system and the consequences of the mc being in the original plot.
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Don't know anything about Eragon or its source material so I went into this completely blind but I'm surprised at how the author fleshed out the world in a manner that was easy to understand. The author especially does a good job fleshing out the characters and giving an insight into each characters thought process and the interactions between each character is unique and in general are fluid. I am around 38 chapters in and I'm invested in the mc's journey. (The journey towards unltimate power and finally getting a taste of the forbidden fruit that is the Dragussy?) Anyways I'm looking forward to where this story goes and hope you publish regular chapters and not drop the story. 🙏
Read this on QQ in full, loved it so far. All I'm going to say author is prepare for some kick back because compared to qq and where else it was posted first, Web Novel has some brain dead readers that like the whole murder hobo personality. Great premise too, this is the second inheritance cycle fic I've read too.
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