/ Anime & Comics / In TDG with Bleach System(dropped)
摘要
smut smut smut smut......
Netori netori netori.....
Blackmail...blackmail......blackmail.....
Action....action...action
Pedo....pedo...pedo...
cuck nie li.....cuck nie li......
Ass whooping of everyone that I don't like......
Face slapping...bashing..... cursing....lot of cursing.
IF U DON'T LIKE IT DONT YOU FUCKING READ IT.....AND SAY HOW DISGUSTING OR RETARDED IT IS....IF U DO I SwEAR IM GONNA CURSE U TO OBLIVION.
NOTE: READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.
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So, to be honest the idea is good, but the mc sucks and isn’t my cup of tea, The Mc is a pervert, not in the normal ‘Im a pervert but i can control myself’, is more of the kind, Ning’er fainted so I’m gonna get her naked and touch all her body, (she was 13) This didnt bother me that much but he isn’t the type of mc that gets flirty and make them fall in love, he’s the kind that manipulated her for years, when got confessed, he took her to have ***, when obviously she didn’t want to he got mad and pretended to be sad by saying “i guess you dont love me” and started walking to the door, planning to be stopped, and his plan b in case she didn’t stop him. was to have more “forceful” methods So i guess i expected to much for an obvius fap and go type of novel the novel is good, the idea is good but i can’t with that mc, he literally doesn’t care about her, he just wants to get laid, so just jump the plot and go directly to a 18+ chapter, fap and then eliminate this from your library... this is the kind of mc that would totally use his ability to hypnotize girls to have *** with him, literally an ugly bastard type of guy but in ban’s body tbh I aint even that mad that this is just smut and didn’t focused more in romance,i mean i have read literotica, but this just leave me with a bad taste, cause his whole reason to exist is getting laid, he’s the kind of guy that use them for *** and then abandon them...
I am a cultured man so I gave Five Stars when I saw Netori Tag, . =͟͟͞͞( 'ヮ' 三 'ヮ' =͟͟͞͞) (*≧▽≦)ﾉｼ))(*≧▽≦)ﾉｼ))( ͡ಠ ʖ̯ ͡ಠ)｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°(*≧▽≦)ﾉｼ))
this is a 5-star review because it has bleach and the fact that it has the chance of having Captain Yamamoto zanpakuto if it doesn't, half a star might be taken off but that does depend on the reason.
0/10, Edgy MC, probably a 12 year olds wet dream. Honestly, it's like MC's either have to be retarded white knights or edgelords so edgy they cut themselves. Is being a reasonable human being impossible now? Anyways, this is a prime example of the trash level shit that fills this site.
Good, not for everybody but its still good (¹⁴⁰:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;;⁰:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;;⁰:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;;⁰:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;;⁰:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;;⁰:;:;:;:;)
Had me at cuck Nie Li