In Highschool DXD as a Player

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Chaotic_Winter

Giving you the 10th review with flying colours because it’s DXD, here just for entertainment so ain’t gonna say much about the novel since I haven’t even read it. However if it’s not harem il dropping it since DXD and without harem is a no go

LV 6

TrueImmortalDevil

Writing quality ... below standard Stability of updates ... standard Story Development ... below standard Character Design ... below standard World Background ... below standard

LV 13

cade2065

Writing quality: It’s readable, a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Stability of updates: so far it is good. Story development: Decent, seems like the plot has been vaguely planned out? Character design: poor, there is no detail or events that explore the character(s). There is no connection or personality... World background: Author does not talk about or give much information on the world, kind of understandable considering it is a fanfiction. Overall enjoyable read, though can work of fleshing out characters and working on grammar...

LV 6

GGMissFortune

This MC tho 😅....... actually considered becoming servant of devil b*tch for a while...😅 .... also thinks his xianxia + gamer hax not enough to keep him safe.... pls... ... ... 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

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Sun_wukong

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LV 5

Steven_Beck

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖

LV 4

Will_Caruso

OK so for this book I say good work on building999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

LV 15

DeuceWolf

Nice....................... Wish there was more............................................... Please update more chapters more often..........

LV 4

Hocolate

Saya harap konten ini dihapus, karena saya membeci plagiat. Good byee 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

LV 5

InspiredVictor

OK so for this book I say good work on building I like issei this version anyway and the girls awesome job and a quick for the author multiverse travel ? can't wait.

LV 5

BowmanW

There is a limit to what is acceptable in terms of grammar and writing quality. This fanfiction contains by far the worst grammar out of all of the non-english native fanfictions that I have read on this site, and that is a lot of them. As for the story, there is nothing new, although there are some interesting components such as the gamer system, but that is it, really. As for character design, Issei's parents are not given a name despite being elevated into incredibly important characters in the story, it is somewhat understandable considering that they are the parents of the Issei from the original work, but the author needs to take risks and just name them, as it is too confusing otherwise. In conclusion, this fanfiction is very below average and it is hard to point out all of the mistakes without taking up 20 pages of a hardback book.

LV 5

BlackIWhite

please put more story on the chapters.... the most i see are the status its like every chapter 1/2 story and 1/2 status fix that problem but still give a 1 or more daily chapters or even 1 chapter every 2 to 3 days and i can rate this fan fic can a 25/25 stars sincerely

LV 4

matja1

I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- V

LV 11

Burn_To_Ash

Good story, don't drop this keep going😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

LV 14

DabanCrow

Sorry man, I’m disappointed. It’s a total flop that’s just plain bad. The MC has enough power to wipe Berry’s and Zeno from DBS all over the universe no sweat and he has no fucking clue. Just a waste of a good opportunity.

LV 10

owen575

The mc is retarded he has 2 parents he gives the abilities and then gives rias and her group it for free and gives like candy and very valuable information also plz use "" when they are talk its very confusing when they talk and i cant tell

LV 5

ASMODEUS

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LV 5

Hamada

Zzzzzzzzzzźzzzzz I like you novel Zzzzzzzzzzźzzzzz Let's say just don't drop it suddenly And we néed more h-scene with more details Let every herone have her own time with the mc date xxx make out ...mc protect her ....she care about him...mc to want make her happy .... We need the pov from the women side ...and there first empress ion about mc .... ..... It will be good if mc take some side quest in other anime world with his harem as training ....May be he could get more peerage ....