摘要
"Why is the world so unfair Mommy?"
"Because we were born as earth mages, son"
The first earth mage betrayed humanity, and as punishment, their power was cursed. But that was not the end of it. The curse was so powerful, it affected generations of earth mages for thousands of years to come...until Matthew Herzia was born.
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- 寫作品質
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- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
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Hello! I am TBQ Novels, the creator of this series! I am really new to this whole gig and am wanting to really get into the business. I originally created this story to just practice my writing abilities but I am getting really into my story. I hope you guys can share this with your friends and give me feedback!
Pretty good. I do see some potential in the future to became a great novel. As long you keep up the updates and work harder on word management it. Novel will turn out well. Keep up the good work and keep updating.