/ Anime & Comics / I will become the ice jellyfish queen with the Chat Group(Dropped)
摘要
after her death, Grey meets a man named six who tells her she will be reborn as a random on a random world but she
has two wishes, before she is reborn his first wise is a Chat Group system, and the second, was super healing so even if she lost her head her body will grow back so after she is done wishing she wake up to find herself in the sea only to see she is a jellyfish in the middle of a frozen sea but this will not make her give up easily she will live like a king or die trying and she is not alone she has a big family of overpowered heroes and villains
note Grey is a codename can you guess her real name
標籤
-- 推薦票
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寫檢討
This is definitely not the best there is on this site. Grammar is horrible, sentences are weird and the plot feels really, really off. The author clearly tries to get somewhere but I can't see it, I guess we can only wait and see for improvement.
hey author can you tell me who all the group chat members are and what they are from I only know what rimaru is from but the others I don't know
Shameless 4-star review from the author. I hope that you guys will read and enjoy the work that I wrote. and how can I develop The story in a good way