/ Book&Literature / I open a black store in Douluo Dalu
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Ye Xuan ventured to the Douluo continent and got hold of a black store system. Wasting no time, he set up a black store in the bustling city of Tiandou, where he sold a variety of mysterious treasure chests. Each chest contained diverse items, some of which did not originate from the Douluo continent.
At one point, Ning Fengzhi opened a treasure chest and enhanced his martial spirit with the Qiluo Tulip, directly ascending to the Nine Treasures Glazed Pagoda. Qian Renxue also allowed herself to be tempted, using treasures from the Tiandou Empire to open a chest that led her to the throne of a deity. Bibi Dong, meanwhile, opened a divine scroll that catapulted her to a divine level of power.
However, as hundred-level Douluos emerged, no one took Ye Xuan, the owner of the black tent, seriously. Even when Tang San, with two divine positions, acquired nine red and one golden spirit rings and intended to plunder Ye Xuan's store, Ye Xuan simply used a divine deprivation scroll to snatch his divine positions.
Ultimately, Ye Xuan's humble tent was proven to be superior to all the gods in the world.
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What kind of black store... Is it the place where you can buy illegal stuff or... (The guy in the gif cost $5 take it or leave it.)
Great fanfic with minimal grammar errors, but a cliche story. Faceslapping and arrogant masters may not be your cup of tea, but this is a certified banger FF with (so far) no romance. The MC is a bit bland (what do you expect from an SI?), but the interactions are satisfying. Overall: 4.2/5
Good fanfic to pass the time, nothing original but you couldn't expect originality from the Chinese. The only regrettable thing is that there are no more chapters.
a good fanfic that I can’t wait to see more _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Story isn't bad but the MC is bland. hes greedy and that's about all you'll ever know about him. he doesn't care about making friends, developing relationships, or adventuring. he's just a boring shop owner. if there was more to him I'd definitely give this story a better rating but he's just so dull. he's not really living. he seems more like an npc.
I do not know what the author smoked, but give it to me too. in general, the story is so-so for a number of reasons, gg is stupid and does not think about the consequences of his own and subordinates, he does not know how to manage staff, earn money for the sake of earning money, but only through a chest, but he can acquire things through the system and sell them, even if the price is too high and what? the characters also revolve around gg as NPCs dummies without a sense of mind, stupid in general.The system is also too weak for sealing spiritual power outside the store, although the author says that only forces operate in the store itself. I would put 3.5 for the story and then only with a stretch. and yes, gg does not know how to get women. the interaction of the characters is also low, a few words here, there are no thoughts of girls, etc.
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Slap fanfic, it's cliché but I like clichés .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................