/ Fantasy / I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
摘要
What if the strongest person reincarnated to another world.
Will he keep pursuing his dream to have a peaceful life?
“Ding.. The Idle system is fully integrated.”
“Wait… Why am I keep getting stronger?!!”
Or will he conquer this new world?
Seek and stay tune Angus's adventure in another world.
標籤
-- 收到的禮物 
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
113評論
3.88
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Writing Quality - Problems in grammar and phrasing. Stability of Updates - 7 per week Story Development - It's enjoyable. Character Design - The characters are all pretty unique and have discerning personalities. World Background - Fantasy world reincarnating, so if that's something you like to read then yeah.
This was/is a good story. It's from the mold of the "former-expert reincarnates" genre. The MC is largely likeable. his interactions with the world and characters are fun for the most part. The characters feel more or less fleshed out and interesting enough to make me care...I think I just got spoiled by those stories where the MC says he's nor going to get wrapped up in stuff and actually successfully avoids it, or even if he doesn't succeed you don't get the feeling that he's not at all serious about this avoiding trouble thing. In this case, its slowly been made abundantly clear that as much as this MC claims to not want to get wrapped up in stuff you can totally wrap him up in stuff if you try at all hard...the mc actually loves combat and fighting and all that typical mc jazz, and it's more that thebway he died has made him gunshy about veing too open about this...and the story makes it necessary for the MC to get wrapped up in stuff because no one besides him is competent enough. I pulled out around the time he started mulling teaching his fighting arts to the princess who by now is almost certainly the female lead, going by the way the wind is blowing. It was like, "dude, are you seriously telling me that no one else in the entire kingdom can do this?!" I don't know...I enjoyed the story for what it is....but I kind thought it'd be different. Let's just say this was a good steak, but I'd kind of been in the mood for hamburger.
I cant even read 1 sentence without seeing errors in the sentences lol you need to get an app like grammarly to help you make sure everything is written correctly
i cant bear to continue reading this. Mc is stupid. he is very contradictory. he wants a peaceful life then he shows all his ability. he professes his love all of a sudden because he suddenly likes the princess. he wants to hide to his stats and chooses not to increase his strength. All of a sudden everyone around Mc becomes strong but the strength of mc is stagnant. so much inconsistency. its harder to read. to be a great expert and weak at the same time and most of all his system? i thought it was an idle game system where he accumulates soul points on his own without doing anything but all of a sudden he needs to fight opponent to gain soul points. stupid novel.
TLDR: Writing Quality - 2 stars because it's in English, just barely. Everything Else - 3 stars because I can't focus on these aspects due to the above I've not read much of this book but that isn't because I dislike the premise or any other issue with the idea behind the book. The reason I can't read this is because the grammar is just awful, the mistakes are frequent and VERY noticeable. Just reading the synopsis should let you know what kind of grammar your in for with this "most strongest" of books. I'll come back and give this book another chance once the basic grammar issues have been fixed but until then I will avoid this like the plague.
🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅
I am sorry but I am dropping this novel. I know that we all want a peaceful life but this story is quite frustrating and annoying. The MC practically gives up on anything that comes his way, whether it's a battle or challenge or something like and his system basically makes him stronger while he does nothing. Other than that, there are many grammatical errors in this story and sometimes, I can't even read a chapter before finding mistakes. I am sorry but I will have to drop it as I cannot read it any further
Story seems good, but the grammar is hot garbage. My grammar isn't very good either, but seriously bro? I just can't pay attention to the story because of that.
Raw... The best I can say about this novel is this. The story development is not bad but the main idea from reading this novel is already lost in around 100 chapters. The MC hidden strength is no longer hidden and he no longer pursues a peaceful life, he just becomes a battle freak who can not control his emotions even when he is a control freak. The FL... what I can say? an old man was attracted to 12 years old girl suddenly when he was ignoring her for 4 years, the FL herself is not a special character and the interaction between them is forced before they start dating and became overly close when they just start dating. other significant characters, the roomates of his has barely any exposure until they become 14 years old and his mother and aunt who should be strong don't have enough exposure while his father and the king is always been on the screen, his teacher who should be an important character don't appear after he joined the school and his brothers have no big role in his life, we don't even know why his big brother disdain him. again the "hidden" part of the story, when he should just enjoy his life, is a lie, almost all the strong characters that were introduced in the story already know about his hidden strength and this make the essence of the story lost, you will also find few plot lines that help in building the world but it always feels fragile and need more support and thinking. There are many good things about this novel because the author is talented but the MC is just giving me a very bad impression that makes me unable to think about the good things. Finally, when I said this novel is raw I meant it literally, the novel feels like a great idea that needs many improvements, editing and polishing. a remake for it will be a hundred times better than what we have now.
This novel is good, a bit more like slice of life with a lazy protagonist, a bit cliche, right now its worth reading, but don't know if author'll mess up in future
The Novel has good potential but it needs a editor badly. 90% Of the sentences need to be reworked. It feels like im reading a bad translation . It also needs to improve the explanation of his system. It keeps getting a new power like an after thought. It would be nice to also have a decription as to how his system works better. Since it seems me and a few others need more details. Such as how does his system help with his studies? How does it help with his spells? Stuff like that. Good potential but needs to be reworked and touched up a bit more.
*I have read till chapter 50 before writing this review* This novel has a lot of potential, unfortunately there are some problems with it. The first thing that I want to emphasize is about the world background, it is very good and has aroused my curiosity and will to continue and uncover its mysteries. But except for that, there is nothing else... Second, the grammar has its problems but it's still readable so I won't beat you picky about that. Third, the MC isn't really overpowered enough to justify his lazy attitude... And when he does start his training, in just one to two months he reached his maximum potential and couldn't improve anymore. Don't get me wrong, he didn't become overpowered fast in just one or two months, he simply became the strongest in his school before he can't improve anymore since he's still young.... So for me, the story just got pointless to read anymore since he can't improve until he grows older in a few years, and instead of doing a time skip, the author starts to describe about an 'interesting' things and adventures of other people... which honestly I don't really care. So I will give this novel 3.8 Stars, and this is considering it is a good world design...
揭示劇透
Grammer isn't just bad. It's literally a war crime. I would suggest the author that they try to write everything in same tense. There's a lot of tools that fix these mistakes too. As it is rn, it's like a really bad mtl or maybe worse. Word, Google docs, even gmail mail composition, there's lot of free options for improvement. If you can't even put at least this little effort then you don't even deserve a review about character, world, story development.
The title is "I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE" but the MC throws himself into random situations unrelated to him for no reason.
seems like a great book, but there are so many issues in the writing. I'm far from a writer, but a basic app like grammarly would do wonders. I would certainly love it if it didnt sound poorly translated, and I genuinely reccomend having some go through and edit/fix such mistakes if you struggle to.
I enjoyed every chapter so far that I saved up to binge read , hope this this goes a long way. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The grammar is an abomination. .............................................................................................................
The synopsis of the story looked great; I liked the title; All in all it seemed like a book I would really enjoy. Then I tried reading the first chapter and the grammer kciked me so hard in the face my teeth were all knocked out. I will be more than happy to change my review if the Grammer improves to a basic level of English.
So... this will be my second review... I had to make one because grammar and everything overall improved during these past few chapters. I just finished reading the latest chapter and I can't believe this is the same author with 1-3 grammar mistakes per every other paragraph! Currently, I'm not great enough to see some big grammar mistakes from the chapters. It's also very commendable that our mc grows not only through power but also personality wise and emotionally. The world is now bigger and more dangerous than I initially thought! The characters are great, not stiff but not overshadowing the mc. Updating wise, ooh lala, still stable. Overall, I will rate everything 5 stars :> I hope more people will take interest in this and continue on reading despite the awful writing from the early chapters because I assure you that it's all worth it and that it gets better. Lave ya author, decided to give this at least 1 power stone every day :)
The characters are ok, the story development is really good. The interactions between the characters keep you entertained and guessing what is going to be next, the ML is evolving at a good pace and the interactions with the other characters is fun and interesting. Plus, I keep waiting for the ML's older brother found out about all his knowledge and power, so I can laugh when he finds out so I can laugh at his reaction.