/ TV / I became Walder Frey
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Antony, when he died, had the chance to reincarnate in the world of GOT, but due to an error by the employee of the transmigration department, he did not become a young and beautiful heir as he wanted, but he ended up becoming the old walder frey, luckily he has a system like apology that will help him live long
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a jewel, really, a beautiful jewel, the concept is interesting, innovative, reincarnating in the old Frey, this is the first time I see it, siding with the Targeryans is even crazier, after all, there is the crazy old king who is suspicious even of rats , but if your son can inherit the throne, it's going to get that much more interesting, the concept is so inexplicably attractive that I'm gnawing for new chapters. my only two points against are: 1 - Harem, I'm sure he's going to get a bunch of wives, so that makes me a little bit backwards, but if the novel doesn't focus on that, I can put up with it. 2- the chapters are very short, if there is a mass release of 3-4 at a time it's ok, but to release them one by one is kind of unsatisfactory.
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So far it is a nice concept. But chapters are too short. Additionally, MC is dumber than a rock. I hope this helps. Suggestions: Make mc think through his actions or explain why he is as dumb as he is. Develop the chapter by putting more detail when describing. Hope this helps
the concept was nice, but a pity story remains a concept. Seven very short chapters.
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Me encanta la idea y de como deja lo cliche de aliarse a loa rebeldes y se alia con los dragones. Me gusta la personalidad del mc, sigue publicando porfavor
The male lead is NOT Chinese, Korean, Japanese, or Asian. The protagonist is a person who prioritizes his own well-being and fun, the second priority is to improve his territory. The protagonist admits that he does not feel an emotional bond with the Frey family; however, his plans include strengthening the Frey family and using its members to build a new kingdom. By the way, author, give the female characters a little more personality but without taking chapters from the MC. Also, add more details about the development and construction of the new kingdom, because this story is tagged: construction of the kingdom.