/ TV / Unique Gamers Travels
摘要
After her death in her previous life, a young woman was reborn in a new world with a unique, but powerful gamer system. Watch as she grows stronger, and finds love along the way!
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Tags - Futanari, Overpowered, Gamer, Lesbian, AU, Alternate universe, fastpaced, TVD, Legacies, action, adventure, magic, harem and more.
THERE IS A HAREM: 5 girls at maximum, currently with 3 of the five.
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I will preface this by saying this is a good story! If you are looking at reviews to see if you should read this or not then yes read it especially if you like an OP MC. Despite this being a good story I do have some issues with the story telling. Spoilers ahead. It annoys me how much the author keeps emphasizing how much they hate Landon. I get it!! You dont need to mention it so much especially when you make EVERY interaction with the character as toxic as possible. If I could offer any piece of advice towards this then I would say that the author missed a huge opportunity here. If you hated the character so much why not change it? Who says you have to do EVERYTHING as it happens in the show? You even have the convenient excuse of butterfly effects of a new character being thrown into mix. You could have written the character in a way that made you and your audience happy. The constant persecution of the character just feels like the story was written to spite him instead of telling the story of your OC. The story is great. And while I want to offer more constructive feedback on other aspects of the story like the pace at which the MC's relationships escalate. The MC is cool with whoever you like most from the story and barely acknowledges anyone else. She doesnt feel like she is part of their story at all. She feels like an outsider who just came to bang Hope. But I feel like it was done in a way where the MC had to get in there before Landon. Again, it just feels like since his name was mentioned in the story everything just became about keeping good things away from him.
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a novel tá boa, mas se tivesse um problema e que tem poucos capítulos, tirando isso tá bom.
Now that the story is getting going, with character interactions, the recent chapters, 7 onwards are quite enjoyable. I've deleted my old review, as now people can keep reading after the initial power building. Looking forward to what comes next
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The book is great author . I would however appreciate it if you would stop neglecting it and start updating regularly like old times.I know you have been focusing more on Gwen than Talia but we like Talia more so pliz more updates
Love this story so far. Pacing is very good, develops rather quickly but in a logical way. The character's personalities are exactly as I had watched in the show, to a very impressive degree! I hope the author continues as the quality makes me check the book twice to three times a day.
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Love the new cover picture! Also for those reading that as a review, this is one of my favorite authors, highly recommend!
Can’t lie I am a big fan of your writing.........................Not just here but also in wattpad So, best of luck🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 This story is the best......Love it and hope you update soon☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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It seems interesting, sadly I don't know anything about the first two worlds he visits, I will read it when they find more chapters of DANMACHI
I think you r doing a wonderful job with this fanfic always leaves me wanting the next chapter I do hope to learn more about mcs background like is there a reason she has the last name of the devil
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Your average, shameless author review! Nothing to see here!