/ Fantasy / I Am The Game's Villain
摘要
Reincarnation in a game as the Main Antagonist.
It could be a novel itself, but that was what I dragged myself into. In the famous and successful game [Princess And Dragon]
As if my life wasn't shitty enough, a bastard brought me in that hardcore violent Dating Sim Game and in the body of the worst villain and [Major Antagonist Edward Falkrona]
If I want to survive, I have to become strong.
If I want to be strong, I have to join the Academy and by joining the Academy, I will meet these guys...
Yeah, I'm obviously speaking about the Protagonist, the Main Heroines, the Villainess and all the villains.
Am I destined to watch that protagonist build his harem in front of me?!
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Review after 1st part of 2nd game ended NOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time! The good: - Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic. - Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!! - 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role. - Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good: - Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective. - At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed. - With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters. One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.
I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing💯
For starters, I don't mean to offend the author or his effort in the story, this is just my criticism. The development of the world is interesting. The characters are interesting and have personality. The biggest problem with the story is the protagonist himself, he's just too boring, especially his obsession with building a harem for jayden, this is just too annoying, we're 100 chapters into it and it doesn't seem like it's going to change anytime soon, it's totally disappointing to read the story, the mc is making fun of a boy's sexuality for following the prince, but he literally does the same thing with jayden???? Author I know you said this was going to change but the question is when? you are not going to insist on the protagonist being jayden's nanny for 200 chapters, are you?
I do not plan to insult or offend anyone, it is my opinion of the novel. The novel has potential, a good development of the world and a clear level of power developed. And there my good opinion remains, the characters feel stupid, especially the mc, to begin with he seems to doubt life at all times, he never thinks about things and does everything on "impulse", until now he has not done anything thinking , from the beginning to the current chapter, he has been told that his ex-girlfriend is alive, which is the main and only reason why he transmigrated, but until now he has not done anything to find out her whereabouts, consult with his system, goddess or not even investigate or try to find it, another example is that of the mc leaving his position as heir to the duke, there is no logic or real reasons behind that, the mc knows that they are going to remove him from his position, and for that reason he resigns a month before When he could try not to remove him, taking advantage of all the resources that the heir to Duke would have, and also ignoring his sister's clear affection for him. Another issue is the mc taking it all as a game after almost dying 2 times in a row and experiencing a death. I'll leave it there, but the more you advance, the more stupid the mc is doing.
story setting is good. but I don't like mc, who always think what he thinks is right. he is irritating to read. in some time he is cool and some i think why he is doing this. making harem for someone is cringe.
It was progressing pretty smoothly and I was enjoying it but right at the end it swerved and hit a tree and died. First is Leon, this is the character that ruined it. First he kills the Mc parents in his first world(but I wrote this one off as character development for the mc) then openly brags about killing everything the Mc loves. He has The OP abilities you would thing a Mc would have. Then for the guy punch he kills mary which leaves a really sour taste and really turns you off from the story cuz it’s safe to assume any girl the Mc actually likes will just get kill by this dude. And the addition of multiple reincarnates takes anything unique about the Mc away leaving him even more fragile. All around waste of 205 chapters( I literally feel like I’ve been cucked. The ending of the first season feels exactly like reading a NTR r@pe hentia)
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MC spends most of his time obsessively building a harem for the protagonist. Its been almost a hundred chapters of this and looks like it might go a hundred more. Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.
It's good so far. But I really hope this won't be a typical cliche novel where a supposedly dangerous and psychopathic yandere obsessed with another person suddenly becomes an uwu girl for the MC and accepts any girl in his harem.
I know I shouldn't judge this one early, but it lacks appeals on me. No offense on this, although I'm only at chapter 6, I dont want to read the rest of the story. It's not my cup of tea.
OKAY, it seems my journey ended here. Thank you for the story. I guess I don't have a choice but to accept it since I don't like your decision. It was very enjoyable to read. Thank u🫡.
Writing quality is fairly easy to understand. It's above average for a webnovel, hence, the 3-star rating. However, it isn't exactly on the level of top novels here so that's that. Story Development is fairly generic but hey, that's what we're all here for. Now, Character Design. This is the one that made me drop and rate, for a very simple reason too. The author tried to make the mc a cringe japanese protagonist. Somehow, even when the girls are swooning over him, he assumes something outlandishly different. It's too stupid it isn't even funny, like, are his eyes fake? Surely, it would be pretty easy to judge if you're at least presentably looking no? But no, the author just had to crash down mc's iq to the negatives. Updating stability, I didn't actually check. World background, fairly average for an isekai plot.
The start is very good. The plot looks promising. The writing quality is nice. Supporting you, AUTHOR All I want is - ''More chapters''🤤 ''More Chapterssssss''🤤🤤 "More chapterssssssssss"🤤🤤🤤
Enigma Red Dungeon is the WORST arc I have ever read. This arc had to be the worst structured one, with So many POV switches with 30-40 characters put on focus simultaneously, every chapter with no link to each other. we are going from someone's tragic death, to someone wishing to create harem, to past life flashbacks, to sudden slice of life, MC doing the annoying hiding identity thing etc, so many things happening all at once. Most annoying thing that kept on happening was we are going through someone's POV story but then cut to another person in the middle of that story, by the time the novel picks up on the previous story point the reader either forgets or stops caring all together. Author please never cook an arc like this ever again.
One of the best novel I've read,the character development of Edward/Amael is very good,the story is very interesting, I ask readers not to judge the novel based on first 100 chapters ,the MC will eventually become powerful and have his own harem ,it's a good story to read
it's Really good, I like it when the author's imagination is broad But not affect the events. Some people say they not like MC and his unstable personality But I think that make him unique and different . I use the translator but I hope you get it[img=coins][img=coins]
A weird guy transmigrated in a Villain's body in a Hardcore Dating Sim Game. Protagonist, Heroines, Villainess, Villain! Everything is there. Are you curious about what Edward will do in that Game-World? Then read it and enjoy! If you have any questions, I am all ears!