/ Anime & Comics / I am just a clone (An Honkai Fanfiction)
摘要
An avid honkai enjoyer went out his way to the market to buy food,
Nothing could possibly go wrong right?
Well, for him it turned out everything could...
Now inside the very game he loved, how would he thrive in the world of honkai ?
He,now a she, how will she make her ways through this cruel and merciless world of hers...?
Will she, like many others succumb to defeat?
Or will she defy the god of her world aswell as many others, and come out victorious?
This extra variable, unanticipated by every being, how will it thrive in this large game of chess...?
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I am very well aware that as a relatively new author I will make many plot holes and mistakes in the story, so please do forgive that for me...
And Adios my readers! We shall meet again in the story!
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寫檢討
It's a 'nice idea but could have done better' fic where the author should have written it more detailedly. Well, I don't really have much opinions regarding it other than the fact it was clearly written by a teenager who just started writing. Who knows, I might change this rating in the future.
As I haven't reviewed this masterpiece yet, I will now. Jokes aside, I do think that the story has been really good till now and is getting even better over time as my bro gains more experience. The writing quality (spelling, grammar) may not be impeccable, but it's definitely more than readable. The world background is obviously amazing as it's Honkai, and the character design and story development have been very nice. As for update stability, It's not the best, though there are definitely many that are worse, but I know that he has his reasons, and it's not like it's abysmally terrible. Still very much acceptable imo. I'll go back to reading now.
As the author myself , I would shamelessly give my own fanfic a five star but you all, as readers must give this poor guy honest reaction about this novel ( Although I would love if you all added a few honey smoothed words!) Adios and see you in the story !