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摘要
Hagoromo Gensou transmigrated to the Naruto world and, through his own efforts, became a prominent figure in the ninja world.
Until one day, the newly appointed Five Kage teamed up and ambushed him immorally. It was only then that the system finally appeared, claiming it could help him rise to become the strongest in the ninja world.
However...
Just as he was about to confront the Five Kage head-on, Gensou silently looked at the first task issued by the system.
[Quest: Ninja School Comeback Initiated! Please defeat your dead-last classmate, Uzumaki Naruto.]
"System, do you know what year it is now?"
[Year 60 of Konoha]
"Right now, it's Year 2 of Konoha! Is there something wrong with this system?!"
...
Many years later, Gensou opened his eyes again, standing on the rooftop of the Chunin Exams building. Looking at the Third Hokage, who was ready for battle, he smirked slightly:
"Although it's a few decades early, I finally made it."
[Raw: 火影：我都硬刚五影了，系统才来]
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I wish they would stop fighting already :/ I hate fights that take longer than 2 chs. Hopefully the plot will start to progress soon
(PT-BR) Aguardando a ansiosamente o próximo capítulo, por favor autor não desista da história, eu estou realmente gostando muito dela e tenho certeza que não sou o único
read ahead in mtl...good story particularly did Sasuke and sakura good but the system is just there for word count mc is all over the place..dude revives and goes all orochimaru and pursuit of immortality....okay to read but missing a bit of interactions and slice of life I guess no romance either so far
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It's too bad,too bad first few chapters shows mc being called “god” instead of hashirama who beat the hell of mc! mc is too arrogant and there's even a chapter that shows the mc is innocent when he's clearly arrogant and many says he's too talented as a child when it's cringe, typical Chinese fic,don't read if you don't want to regret it
I've read 332 chapters on the raw, and I think this is a great fanfic. I highly recommend this. There is a system, but it basically does nothing throughout the entire story. Everything is achieved by the main character alone. Also, women only increase his sealing speed, so in all I've read there is no romance.
Normally I don't do reviews but I just had to this time.The translation quality is unbelievable for something on webnovel.Up until chapter 30 the action has been intense and I have rarely ever seen such interesting fight sequences in a NARUTO fanfic.Don't believe me? just check my profile you will know how many stories I have read on webnovel alone.This is an amazing fic! BELIEVE IT!
It's a copy of "Counterattack System appeared when I'm already At The Mahayana Realm" but in naruto. ...........................................................
Except for the start of the fanfic where the fighting scene took almost 15 chapters, this fanfic is awesome! The translation is excellent (as of chapter 122) without any mistakes, and the plot itself doesn't have any plot holes that I could find. The only shame is that the translator translate only one chapter a day and not several more. This is definitely a five star.
first your inconsistent giving hope then taking it away like excessively nerfing him when he is not that powerful the alien cheats he got none his system is trash give him better things at least he has many weaknesses and u nerf him a lot i’m sorry but this is trash
alright let's not stretch it and get to the point #cons :- 1) story has no logic butterfly effect doesn't exist even tho it's a reincarnation story with mc born in warring states era 2) no charector development or proper story development it's just one big mc glazing story 3) all fights with no stakes mc is like two steps ahead alltime and makes no sense sometimes too 4) no proper backstory or charector introduction to boot #pros:- 1) although the story plot is trash the fights in itself are good 2) translation has minor error and doesn't effect the overall immersive experience much 3) jutsu development is great with quite a few badass moments conclusion :- if you're an addicted man with Naruto fanfic genre then read it it's good for timepass but if you're a newbie trying fics for the first or second time then don't bother on this just skip this one out fr cause I don't want you to read this brain dead one as a starter ratings :- 4,2,4,5,1
One must never ask what happened with chapter 222 of this story, its not something you should pay attention too, it something better left in the darkness
So the plot is.... the mc started out killing evil people.... then started killing ninja ..... then started kill good people and student ninja who hadnt even graduated yet or maybe genin..... are we supposed to like this edgelord MC that kills weak because he went psycho???? i hope this MC dies.
to me it's okay I just don't like it that's much I'm losing interest fast I'm forcing myself to keep reading it But that's just my taste in preferences if other people like action and a long fight scene Then they should definitely try this one It's up to their taste but to people who get tired of fighting since easily this one is not really for you but hey that's just my opinion
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writing quality is pretty good, with minimal mistakes and almost no grammatical errors. story is developing in a unique direction. characters feel like actual people and not NPCs. as of right now, updating is stable with no days skipped. world building is also pretty good. the powers of the MC are reasonable, still streching it a bit, but reasonable. all in all a very good read. I recommend.
(PT-BR) A história tá toa boa que eu tive que dar uma pedra de poder para o autor, espero que o autor não desista da história e continue mantendo a qualidade dela, estou ansioso para como o protagonista vai voltar para seu corpo.
Best OC Character for me during the warring states period and then moves to Naruto's timeline, funny and strong MC Please do not drop this novel Thank you
It's been a long time since I read something with battles so well written, the fanfic is perfect, what I like most about this fanfic would be the Epic feeling it brings, both the battle against Hashirama and everything else
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