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What would happen if someone impersonated Morty? What happens if Morty is smarter? More powerful, more cunning, with more ambitions and better than before, if you want to know this is your story, a story where someone transmigrates into the body of one of the main characters.
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bot reviews lol tf is this grammar lol bro use chat gpt or some ai to check your grammar or make your paragraphs grammatically correct.
this interested me. not that you can find works about Rick and Morty.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend]
honestly I've been looking for a Rick and Morty fanfic for years, and this one pleased me in many ways, to begin with the author managed to perfectly capture the personality of the characters, the lines are very fluid, the perfect context, grammar too, the only thing I found a little unrealistic was the speed with which the protagonist grows, of course I know that with an opponent like rick, preparation is never too much, and another thing is no problem the chapters take time, they are perfect and have a lot of words, like a Someone once said, quality over quantity. That's all thank you for your attention and I hope that continuing this story brought me great happiness
Terrible grammar, even worse than a MTL. No honor spared for the og characters (in the second chapter Beth already has the hots for Morty).
your fanfics have a fundamental flaw, you assume morty to be dumb, if you look at the feats morty accomplished on the cartoon, dude, its impossible to say that morty is bellow average, he is already smarter that a normal person, and judging from your grammar, morty is smarter that you author.
Just poor writing quality. Sometimes I let the quality go for an interesting plot, but I honestly can’t get through another chapter.
Right now the story is good, but there are a lot of he, she and i mistakes. But i can I read it fairly normally because I'm used to corecting things in my head.
The only redeemable thing about this Fanfiction is the title... Which by the way is incredible. After giving credit where credit is due, I have to say that this is a steaming pile of garbage. Any MTL would be a more cohesive and enjoyable read than this. Please, spare your brain cells and stay away from this with a 10ft pole.
Are these people giving 5-star reviews reading the same fic? How can they even review it if you can understand what its saying?
Muy buena historia y bien detallada sigue así espero con ansias el desarrollo de la historia y de los siguientes capítulos ya llevaba un tiempo esperando que alguien sacara una historia sobre esta seria gracias
I’ll be honest I REALLY want this to be good as VERY few Rick and Morty fanfics exist in fact it’s the first one i’ve seen. Author SOMETHING needs to change because these first 4 chapters were not very good quality. When describing a characters action why are you putting it in parenthesies? You need to learn how to make it flow naturally. Dialouge should have Quotation marks. Talking: ”Hello Mother, How was your day?” Thinking: ‘Man I really want to eat a pizza.’ Actions: Then I proceeded to sit at the dining table. Combined: As I walked into the kitchen I noticed mom was already there. “Hello Mother, How was your day?” I started to look for food but couldn’t find any. ‘Man I really want to eat a pizza.’ Then I walked over to the table, pulled out a chair, and proceeded to sit down. Author the way the mc has been acting is way too awkward to read. The interactions between Morty and females are explained in a way that EVERY girl is in heat basically. This is not a good writing style as it gives the female much less depth to their characters.
Morty ☝️🦾👁️🤳...........mm................................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i would recommend reading this story because it's a interesting take on a reincarnation story and the main character Morty is well executed and you want to now what he will do next. the grammar may some times be rough but it's still better than som of the other things i have read
I really like the story but the writing could use some work but other then that can't wait for you to up load more. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Ei autor continue a escrever! Existe muita poucas fanfic de Rick and morty e isso tá me deixando louco! Tô gostando bastante dessa fanfic então por favor não desista dessa fanfic e continue a escrever!
;) very good fic some writing errors but entertaining I would appreciate it if you updated more often. ..................................................................................................................................
I don't see alot of good rick and morty stories please keep updating!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
