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I'm Female Lead In Their World: Living in the High School of the Dead
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摘要
[[ what would happen if someone have the ability to transmigrate to all anime worlds at will? ]]
she's not got helps from a god or system that manage some character transferred to another world like a other story
BECAUSE THIS GIRL HERSELF CAN DO THAT WITHOUT IT...
“I am the author in my book”
“no one can stop me!”
she woke up that she was inside a space that was full of white walls.
Inside the space that she was standing in look like a BOX.
At the centre of the space, she noticed that a small box floating and slowly turning around like a globe.
She approached it and placed her both hands above the white box. After a few seconds, the white box was glowing and keep brighter then the lights came out like a hologram.
The sentences that were shown on the hologram is -
'WELCOME TO YOUR WORLD OF IMAGINATION'
First chapter ‘HIGHSCHOOL OF THE DEAD’……
*just to say that I'm not a native English speaker. And the use of words is just simple and not an expert of it. If you looking for good grammar or difficult words, you can comment on the suggestion and I will try to improve it from time to time.
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The overall idea is alright but a lot of it seems pointless too. This is one of those fanfics where the mc feels like +1 that is supposedly the main character but doesnt really change the main plot. For example she knows the plot but keeps Shido alive. Another thing that I don't like is hoe she just conjures whatevrr she wants from soundless pistols to soundless grenades out of thin air... The overall character herself is likable enough, I just don't see much value in her bring part of the story if she doesn't drastically alter events like Shido getting on the bus when she catches him red handed and saves his would be victem. Its like those harry potter novels where there is this 4th member of the golden trio who uses the plot to seem smart but doesnt change a damned thing worth mentioning. So yeah. I like the mission style entry into the world, I like the personality of the character, but i don't like the fact she conjures things out of thin air with no logical reason for it nor leaves Shido behind when theres ample reason and chance to never have him reach the bus in the first place. All in all the story does have potential.