/ Book&Literature / HP: Thunderstorm, Moon, and The Seer
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What would happen when Fate decided to alter things a little?
Harry's years of abuse left him broken more than one could imagine. An ever-changing meeting shall reshape Destiny
Albeit for whatever Fate bestows, there is always a price.
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I didn't really see any major grammatical errors mentioned by the previous reviewers I really am enjoying the story a lot the bond between Ethan and Harry is very wholesome and I can't wait to read more
really liked the book but like the other reviewer said allot of mistakes if you can look past them great read (different mistakes than MTL)
I like the warmth in the story. Harry finally had the parents he was supposed to have and a loving family. The protagonist and those around him have a warm relationship. Simply put, it's the tone of a Harry Potter fanfic that not many people write. I really liked this story and hope the writer will continue it soon.
I Like to read this it has some good emotion and how ethan and harry interact is good i was locking for something new to read and saw this and i hope the author will not drop this Fan-fic
Shameless Author here! Like most author on this app did, I also utilize this mechanic as a small boost to my fiction.This is my first ever fanfiction,so there are a lot of errors to be fix which I'm working on it everyday. So, I really appreciate that you take a look at this work of mind, any constructive criticisms are always welcome.So please leave a review!
there are frequent Grammer issues that lead to me dropping this at the second chapter. otherwise it seems to have a lot of potential. the characters also feel 3 dimensional.