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寫檢討
Shameless Author here! Like most author on this app did, I also utilize this mechanic as a small boost to my fiction.This is my first ever fanfiction,so there are a lot of errors to be fix which I'm working on it everyday. So, I really appreciate that you take a look at this work of mind, any constructive criticisms are always welcome.So please leave a review!
I Like to read this it has some good emotion and how ethan and harry interact is good i was locking for something new to read and saw this and i hope the author will not drop this Fan-fic
I didn't really see any major grammatical errors mentioned by the previous reviewers I really am enjoying the story a lot the bond between Ethan and Harry is very wholesome and I can't wait to read more
really liked the book but like the other reviewer said allot of mistakes if you can look past them great read (different mistakes than MTL)
there are frequent Grammer issues that lead to me dropping this at the second chapter. otherwise it seems to have a lot of potential. the characters also feel 3 dimensional.
I like the warmth in the story. Harry finally had the parents he was supposed to have and a loving family. The protagonist and those around him have a warm relationship. Simply put, it's the tone of a Harry Potter fanfic that not many people write. I really liked this story and hope the writer will continue it soon.
Shameless Author here! Like most author on this app did, I also utilize this mechanic as a small boost to my fiction.This is my first ever fanfiction,so there are a lot of errors to be fix which I'm working on it everyday. So, I really appreciate that you take a look at this work of mind, any constructive criticisms are always welcome.So please leave a review!
I Like to read this it has some good emotion and how ethan and harry interact is good i was locking for something new to read and saw this and i hope the author will not drop this Fan-fic
I didn't really see any major grammatical errors mentioned by the previous reviewers I really am enjoying the story a lot the bond between Ethan and Harry is very wholesome and I can't wait to read more
really liked the book but like the other reviewer said allot of mistakes if you can look past them great read (different mistakes than MTL)
there are frequent Grammer issues that lead to me dropping this at the second chapter. otherwise it seems to have a lot of potential. the characters also feel 3 dimensional.
I like the warmth in the story. Harry finally had the parents he was supposed to have and a loving family. The protagonist and those around him have a warm relationship. Simply put, it's the tone of a Harry Potter fanfic that not many people write. I really liked this story and hope the writer will continue it soon.