摘要
Ever wonder what would happen when Earth got booted up into the magical world several league above us?
I mean literal assimilation. Someone just plops the seven continents of Earth onto a massive world several time the sizes of our planet.
This Horizon Record #1: About 100 days after Earth was assimilate into Phantasia in the event called Casualty Limit...
To all my friends from our fair planet that might be reading this. I know things look desperate. I felt the same terror you felt when the Demonic Continent and Emma Enterprise took over the Middle East and half of Asia.
Admittedly, I am not on one our continents right now. I am currently traveling on an endless journey with my new comrades... the goal of our Odyssey is far from over...
Phantasia is a buffer against World Enemies-- Monsters from the realm between existences hell-bent on wiping everyone and everything from Multiverse. As the citizen of Phantasia we have a duty to keep them at bay. And we, to my dismay, was heading toward complete annihilation.
The Demonic Continent will not rest until all other races is subjugate or wipe out. On the other side, the Holy Order will burn all that reject their world wield in hell of holy fire. The elves of Lightwell had allied themselves with Emma Enterprise and the Isle of Knowledge in an attempt to obtain monopoly over all wealth and power Phantasia had to offer. The other empires are steeped in corruption with the inevitable war between the factions of nobles and Liberator threatening to tore our society and security to pieces.
And with Earth being largest landmass assimilate in a hundred year, all those eyes and claws are aiming upon our world.
Meanwhile, the World Enemies got stronger every year. Unless something was done, Phantasia will be destroyed and the rest of the Multiverse will follow.
So bring it on. We might be small and helpless but heroes had to come from somewhere. We made an oath to save all we can reach... call it naive or stupid but we will not allow any sacrifices.
If absolute power was require to save everyone then we just have to achieve that absolute power and show all the worlds that heroes and knights still remain...that this is simply a beginning.
Now watch us hard-carry this idiotic yet wonderful toward better future.
This is Hikma De Darwin-- the 5th member of Horizon Dawn and the Chronicler of Magic...and this is our story...of not only me but the Horizon .
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The writer here. Given that there is no review other than the first one (thank you very much by the way). I think it time to do the job myself. Horizon Dawn was an RPG mechanic-base novel focusing on the adventure of Rem Breaker. As a protagonist, Rem act for all intense and purpose as a weirdo who took being dropped in the other world with minimum panic. He occasionally displayed wisdom way beyond his year and despite the cynical outlook on himself and other had a high hope and sincerely wanted to believe in the good of humanity. This was contrasted heavily with the co-main character Cytotia. She was emotional, bratty, arrogant, naive to the fault, overspecialize to the point of near uselessness and tad too passionate. But where she shined she scorched. And behind the arrogance was a highly responsible and carrying person once you befriend her (sadly the naiveness and passion was still there). Surprisingly, she was the core of the group moral not Rem. Rem represents the reality of humanity. He wants to do the right thing but sincerely didn’t how or even if he should. This compared to intense inner insecurity and self-deprecation that he pretend didn’t exist humanise him more than some other MC elsewhere. His power represents the potential of humanity. It was unwieldy, have high set back and huge limitation but have potential to be completely undefeatable when used masterfully. The story of Horizon dawn was the story of how those two went around the worlds several sizes larger than earth recruiting exiles, oddball, sand others to basically change that world. And unlike transport to the other world novel this time the entire earth is transported. And for that Harem lover out there, good news it can be implemented, bad news Rem was not the only male MC in the party who got the girl Oh noted here there is no nationalism so feel free.
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Great Start so Far. Looking forward to More. SO far the grammar is pretty good. The English is on the level of native speakers. RPG style setting.