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摘要
Treacherous geeks cross over into Naruto Uzumaki, with the strongest system to build the strongest Hokage.
A geek: "Wait, let's see what this daily quest is about... well, it's pretty simple: kick Third Hokage's butt. Okay, I'll admit that you're setting me up, but is Hokage's buttock something that can be kicked, and if it is, will Anbu Black Ops leave me alone? God, someone help me. "
A system: " I am God. "
" ...... "
A geek: " You gripe, I'll do it, just kick the buttock, what's the big deal? After eighteen years at most, I'm still a good man. "
Written by: Toad in Pursuit of a Dream (追求梦想的蛤蟆)
Translated by: ltdagabriel
Hokage's Strongest System(火影之最强系统)
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intresting idea and story but badly writen or translated(language i guess) and big incoherence. The guy just kyuby mode in the middle of the village and no sensor alerted?wtf
I wanted to give a 0 star,,, This is copied from COMRADEMAO .....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....Copycat Trash....
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Es Muy divertido leer esto Me encanta y espero que no la dejen caer Sin nada mas que decir Más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.
estou muito feliz em ver um BR por aqui \o/ .................................. ................................... ........................................
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your grammar is not bad, but just overall confusing, mostly because you use Parenthesis to many times and other symbols, try to find someone to reread your you're stuff over not bad little hard to read, but a good story
Man I hate authors that cant settle on one frigging name for the MC but he has to have two the whole time..typical Wuxia writers! Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu Naruto, also known as Sòng yóu