/ Realistic / His dirty little angel (Completed)
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"Ria if I get harder than I am now I will explode right here and now." He whispered in my ear. "Lord help me! How I want to fuck that sweet mouth of yours so much more than I want to climb the pulpit."
I moaned out. His words drove me to another orgasm.
She was innocent, young, pure, good until she met him. He was her priest until he became her lover. He destroyed her Innocence yet she loved him for it. Love, hate, desire, rage they were just a few of the things she felt for him. He knew just how to make her bend and beg and when he touched her, "El ansia."
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I thought the beginning would of been better. Lot of grammar mistakes. The 1st chapter is suppose to draw you into the book so you will want to read more, but this didn't do it for me.
Good read! Great story from what is published so far.Would have liked to read more in depth of the *** scenes. The red room part of the control.
Wow the writer have really tried but he is supposed to have had a better ending for the lovers especially the girl ,she is really in love so the pastor
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