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Good read! Great story from what is published so far.Would have liked to read more in depth of the *** scenes. The red room part of the control.
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Wow the writer have really tried but he is supposed to have had a better ending for the lovers especially the girl ,she is really in love so the pastor
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I thought the beginning would of been better. Lot of grammar mistakes. The 1st chapter is suppose to draw you into the book so you will want to read more, but this didn't do it for me.
Good read! Great story from what is published so far.Would have liked to read more in depth of the *** scenes. The red room part of the control.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Wow the writer have really tried but he is supposed to have had a better ending for the lovers especially the girl ,she is really in love so the pastor
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I thought the beginning would of been better. Lot of grammar mistakes. The 1st chapter is suppose to draw you into the book so you will want to read more, but this didn't do it for me.