/ Anime & Comics / High School DxD: Reborn as a noble devil
摘要
Nero is a guy who died in his original world and got reborn in the body of a human in another world. He always thought that his memories in infancy were random dreams, but he died again and got back to his original body with the memories of both life experiences and the knowledge that he got in the human life. And that is the start of his life in the world in the Draconic Deus universe.
*All the photos and the universe of Highschool DxD are not owned by me. This is just a fanfiction based in the universe of Draconic Deus(DxD).
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It turns out to be a good idea, the downside is that it's a bit cumbersome to read, I guess the author is pretty new to this, but no problem, that gets better with time. An important recommendation, author, is that you tend to write what you want us to know when it comes to feelings, and you do it very directly, for example, with the part where you explain the smile for people the MC doesn't trust, or that Sirzechs began to see him as a possible friend because he misunderstood his intentions, you have to do it a little more subtle, make us understand without giving it to us so directly, but overall this has great potential!