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heavenly restriction

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作者: cuddlypanda

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joe mamana normal everyday bluecollar worker with funny name, dies and gets a chance to try again.

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T_JR
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Live the concept of the book, but i feel like the mc childness can be toned down a little.—-——//////////////////////////////////////////////

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Verae
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Most annoying mc ever , childish aswell e_e but im not a hater , so here is 5 stars ------------------------------------------------------------------

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