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摘要
Ryan is living a mundane, exhausting life when he suddenly transmigrated into a dangerous universe.
"Will I become a player? Or will I have a godlike system? "
Nope. He'll be starting with a trading system, where he will meet people like him from various universes.
Will he adapt to the new world? Will he shine or will he be in the shadow?
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Author: This is my first time writing. English is not my first language, but hey, I am learning.
warning: The protagonist in the story will split his soul into three, in which it will become a multiple leads story, each soul going into their own direction.
To understand why I make three protagonist, I will first share with you a Japanese saying. A man has 3 mask, the first face, you show to the world. The second face, you show to your close friends, and your family. The third face, you never show anyone.
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The Story has a very interesting take on the merchant/shop type systems and I love how the author ties all the diffrent POV's together. He adds in Omake type chapters you want to skip but can't as it ties together the actions of his MC with future direction of the story. It is all very well written and keeps you drawn into the progress of the story no instant power ups, and the MC is very human in his personality and there is a lot of character building put into the story better fleshing out he man he used to be.
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it's about a man transmigration into a boy in mcu with a system with trade facility. the starting goes good and author did a good job then it comes the clone him and split his personality I was like okay. then the clone arc which is really good. then it becomes a typical fanfiction. personally after getting quest I become to lose intrest. and also with the mc love is rushed. where in mc clone case I think that idea is really good worth for its own without system and other things. then it comes the magic which made he drop reading it. it is really hard to have a character which on the same plane as mcu character. if the author tones the mc system and props he get and become a superhuman but not op it would be intresting. The characters character not so attachable. my advice to author is put yourself into the situation and write more practical with exaggeration. just because you got a system and in mcu nothing becomes easy. overall it's okay for me
I like the multiple pov of the fanfic which is quite unique as said by the author in the pinned comment that the story is going to be Multiple POV and lead of the same person but after reading quite a lot it feels like the clones are not the same person anymore with their different personalities and all. I read many comments about people having problem same as mine that they want to know if the clones will continue with their different personalities or they gonna be one lead again or not. Till now author have not replied to any of the comment which tells me that the clones will be different person at one point in the story which is quite a turn off for me. Having clones like naruto or a same mind clone is not bad but clones with different personalities and someday they might become different individual person is quite detrimental for the story , Unless the author cough out what he is planning , I have to go for 3 star as I dnt like reading Different MCs POV.
Too much focus on the clones and apparently the 2 clones are not clones anymore because the can do whatever they want like the fighr with the doctor clone Too much unnecessary drama between the clones Tldr the clones don't obey the mc and they do what they want
A Good story but the clone thing that have almost gonna became separate independent individual. For me the story became bad because of it. its my opinion so no offense sorry
Writing quality would be 0 starts if giving 0 stars was possible. Everything else is 3 stars. .
The story started off good and it was entertaining.. but then stopped being so, because of the constant unnecessary drama and endless fighting scenes.. it got boring quick...
The story beginning is fine, but later after our hero got himself a clone and not one, story goes downhill.
The author writing focuses on the drama and the interaction rather than a full blown OP protagonist who can fight the world. I understand the concept of the clones, but not quite sure that I love it. The romance is unexpectedly good here. I didn't expect that. If you're searching for a wholesome and relaxing story, you can choose to read the fic. (chapter 82-84 is rough, just skip it if you don't like it) Overall Nice job Author!
overall story is told is great but making clones and giving them each different personalities brings a unique taste to it. story in novel stars from chapter 4 first 3 are the background
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Sei que é um comentário em português, mas tanto faz. Sua história e maravilhosa e continue de um fã estrangeiro .,.................................
Would highly recomend this story. a very relaxed novel that always seems to put a smile on my face :))
one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Thank you for your work
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
I love the novel despite not being OK with many things but I just want to ask. When will all the soul pieces join back together? I really don't like how they all their own personality and sometimes the clones are better than the main body itself. The doctor is the best though. I hope you have a plan to join all clones together before they all start their own relationship because having multiple bodies and girlfriends seems like cheating in a manner.
The story is both interesting and with enough humour to keep the story fresh. I wasn’t sure I would like this story as I’m a bit sick of system’s but I have really enjoyed the novel. The system is one that I haven’t really encountered before. I found the romance to be surprisingly good. Some small mistake with grammar but nothing too noticeable.
Hi, I am the author of the book who will shamelessly review my story. I plan for an ordinary mc in the Marvelverse. The story is greatly influenced by the slice of life genre. It consists of multiple POV and lead, to show the effect of an environment affecting the same person. Hope you enjoy the story. P.S. The MC had lost his memory of his family, in which it will play a big part later on in the story
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